tpo 36
The reading present the efficacy of cloud seeding which is a developed method of reducing hails that devastate the cultivation in farms of United States. The profssor, however, challenges the opinios and refutes all the claims made in the article.
First, the author asserts that it had tested in laboratory that it is efective and experiments show that silver iodide addition to cloud.The lecturer, on the other hand, proves that seed clouding might prevent any kind of percipitation which would lead to drought that consequently, affects crops intensively.
Furthermore, the writer states that due to the good results in some countries in Asia, it would be benefitiary in US, too. In contrast, the speaker contends that Asian countries have the problem of air pollution in their urban areas and in those situation seed cloud had that result, whereas,it cannot be experienced in non-polluted farms of the US.
Finally, the author says that according to local studies surveyed in many areas, the reduction of hails can be concluded. Conversely, the lecturer proves that it is wrong to take into conclution that in farms of the US, the hail would reduce because different areas' weather vary from each other naturally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ow that silver iodide addition to cloud.The lecturer, on the other hand, proves tha...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
...r pollution in their urban areas and in those situation seed cloud had that result, whereas,it ...
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Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...tion seed cloud had that result, whereas,it cannot be experienced in non-polluted f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, in contrast, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23737373737 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74375862769 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1868219138 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.142857143 110.228320801 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 21.698381199 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1428571429 7.06452816374 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.8541721854 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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