TPO 41 - integrated writing
he article states that environmentalists in United States are concerned about the damage that burning caol prodused and United States government
should create new, and much stricter for handling and storing coal ash. However repsentatives of power companies take the opposite view and
provide three reseans of support. Converstly the professore explains that the government should consider the environmentalists concernes and
refutes each of the repsentatives of power companies reseans.
First, repsentatives of power companies claims that effective environmental regulations already exist. The professore refutes this points by saying that the regulations
are not sufficiant and most of coal ash components are leaking into grandwater and posion hte water drink. She states that liner-special
material are used in new companies not the old one and this liner-special material should apply to all sites including new and old.
Secently, they are concern that creating very strict rules might discourage the recycling of coal ash into other
materials, however the professor says that its not true because there are very strict rules for other material like mercury and it is recycle for
50 years and this strict rules did not effect the recycling progress.
Third, "strict new regulations will resulted in significant increase in disposal and handling costs and consquently
arised the price for general public " they said. The professore opposes this points by explaining that this extra
cost well worth because these new refulations will decrease the enviroment pollution. According to the professor
this new regualtion will cost about 50 billions dollar and when this cost divided into the customers, their bill
just increas for 1 %.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he article states that environmentalists i...
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Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'articles'.
Suggestion: articles
he article states that environmentalists in United...
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Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...cter for handling and storing coal ash. However repsentatives of power companies take t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wer companies take the opposite view and provide three reseans of support. Conver...
^^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ider the environmentalists concernes and refutes each of the repsentatives of pow...
^^^
Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erial like mercury and it is recycle for 50 years and this strict rules did not e...
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Line 10, column 40, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... 50 years and this strict rules did not effect the recycling progress. Third, 's...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
...hird, 'strict new regulations will resulted in significant increase in disposal and...
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Line 12, column 22, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...s and consquently arised the price for general public ' they said. The professore oppose...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt pollution. According to the professor this new regualtion will cost about 50 b...
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Line 14, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t divided into the customers, their bill just increas for 1 %.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, third, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 266.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66165413534 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91357363606 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.527311009 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.6 110.228320801 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.09492273731 366% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448670385753 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162986273365 0.0996497079465 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855411832407 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143235792554 0.162205337803 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109138191555 0.0443174109184 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.8541721854 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.2367328918 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 63.6247240618 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.