TPO 42 task 1
The reading claims that there are some solutions for stopping birds got injured when they try to fly throgh glass windows. However, the lecturer finds all ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
The author argues that one-way glass can be used to solve this issue. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that this solution has it's own problem. He explains that birds see one-way glass as a reflector like a mirror which it is as bad as regular glass. He indicates that since birds dont understand the mirror, they can see the reflaction of a tree or sky in the glass and assumed that it is actual tree or sky so they can fly through them. Consequently they'll get hurt by this solution.
Furthermore, the reading posits that another solution is to use colorful lines or other designs on regular window glass in order to prevent birds get hurt. On the contrart, the professor underlines the fact that this solution also has it's own problem. He asserts that birds can see the unpainted part as a open holes and try to fly right through them. He explains that the only way that this solution may work is to make unpainted parts very small which is not good since, inside the room will get too dark.
Finally, the reading holds the view that another solution is to create an artificial magnetic field to guid birds away from building. It explains that birds have a natural abiliyu to sence Earth's magnetic fields. In contrast, the speaker dismissed this issue due to the fact that although it is true that birds use this ability to determine their right direction, they use this ability only for long distance trip. The professor explains birds use this ability to migrate from a cold place to a warmer place in the winter as an example to illustrate this fact that birds do not use this ability for short trip like from this side of city to another side. They only use their eyes and brightness of light for short trip.
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- TPO 45 Q1 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ar glass. He indicates that since birds dont understand the mirror, they can see the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ee or sky so they can fly through them. Consequently theyll get hurt by this solution. Fu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...they can fly through them. Consequently theyll get hurt by this solution. Furthermo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hat birds can see the unpainted part as a open holes and try to fly right through...
^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inted parts very small which is not good since, inside the room will get too dark...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6091954023 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24827997555 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502873563218 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6162032434 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455908209972 0.272083759551 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149593021352 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097078283714 0.0662205650399 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265636672662 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662034608325 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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