The article and the lecture both about the species' Pterosaurs and their powerful and complex flight system. It is mentioned in the passage that, these mammals are cold blooded unlike; warm blooded, which can regulate body temperature. Also, they had a giant or massive size of bodies, marked them different from others. The professor casts doubt made on the article . He claimed that there are many research, that make clear the consequences.
Firstly, the author explains that as these animals had heavy weighted bodies, so, they wanted a-tons of energy for just before flight, which is mainly the character of warm blooded species. Hence, this proves wrong. While the lecturer states that they could maintain their body temperature similarly the warm blooded; shown by the recent studies of it's fossilization.
Secondly, the reading contends that, they had a huge type of structure, describe it more clearly that how can a animal could fly by a lot of skeletal mass. However, the professor rebuts this statement. He state that it looks like a giant structure, but in fact, inner part is hollow cavity, meaning; not contain huge weight like it seems.
Lastly, the article points out that it takes a lot of of energy, when mammals are jumping, like a bird, using hind limbs to fly. But, the professor argue that these mammals used 4 legs, in stead of 2 and took flight as high as the can flew. This is also proves by the studying the fossils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rofessor casts doubt made on the article . He claimed that there are many research...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...the article . He claimed that there are many research, that make clear the consequences. Fir...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., describe it more clearly that how can a animal could fly by a lot of skeletal m...
^
Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
... article points out that it takes a lot of of energy, when mammals are jumping, like ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
...r argue that these mammals used 4 legs, in stead of 2 and took flight as high as the can fl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85020242915 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39346361036 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4490059249 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5714285714 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159972106471 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460908796392 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491135594431 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916929617542 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432150270376 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.