TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task
Both the reading and the listening discuss humpback whale uses stars for navigation to migrate far distances for searching food and mating. The reading supports the idea that humpback whale is highly possible to navigate by the stars for following three reasons while the professor agrees with the aspect that humpback whale uses stars to find a direction but the examples mentioned in the reading is pure imagination.
The reading firstly claims that humpback whales' intelligent is enough to understand stars to navigate. However, the listening elucidates that whale's high cognitive ability cannot determine whole intelligent, and she gives an example of some birds that use stars to navigate. The birds have only natural instinct but intelligent.
Furthermore, the passage mentions that straight lines that humpback whales use to. humpback whales migrate in open-ocean that have not orientations such as external object or forces but stars. Nevertheless, the listening says that humpback whales use bio-magnetite which connects to the magnetic field and help to find directions rather than start when they travel in the open ocean.
The last point of the reading mentions spy-hopping. Meanwhile, the professor mentions another ocean creature, shark, also does spy-hopping for hunting and most of the whales do spy-hopping in the day time when nothing stars show up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48356807512 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72655588414 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586854460094 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.203050526 49.2860985944 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419079798878 0.272083759551 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174573348452 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847009326702 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246285478812 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805197860845 0.0443174109184 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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