Both the passage and the audio are talking about the migration of humpback whales and the way they use to find their far destinatin . The passage claims that the stars guide the wales to their destination during their long way delving into three reasons. In the contrary,the lecturer in the audio refutes every reason mentioned in the passage.
First,The author of the passage claims that humpback whales are navigating by the stars using their intellegence. Wherase,the lecturer cast doubt on that because alot of animals which not known as smart species like birds and dogs migrate navigating by stars as a natural ability born with them and the intellegence for sure do not play any role in that.
Second,the passage asserts that humpback whales migrate in straight lines and because of the absence of their ability to mark features in the open ocean ,they orient themselves by external objects relying on the stars.However, the lecturer refutes that idea because the animals which migrates in a straight line are usually affected by the biomagnetic field which is the earth magnatic filed.And that filed affects the whales and makes them orienting by themselves.
Third,the spy-hopping, a behavor observed in humpback whales, is a method they use to be able to look to the stars to be navigate by them according to the passage. Seems completely unconviencing according to the lecturer because the whales usually do spy-hopping not only at night when the stars shine,but also during the morning when there is no star.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ion of humpback whales and the way they use to find their far destinatin . The pas...
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...hales and the way they use to find their far destinatin . The passage claims that...
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...y they use to find their far destinatin . The passage claims that the stars guide...
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...field which is the earth magnatic filed.And that filed affects the whales and makes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, so, third, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07569721116 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67992029529 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.891395636 49.2860985944 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.25 110.228320801 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 21.698381199 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366388300904 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153091621738 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865808862834 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216738375921 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042500277451 0.0443174109184 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.3589403974 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.0289183223 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.