TPO 52
The main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about colonizatoin of asteroids. Having this in mind the passage provide three reasons stating that colonization of asteroids are beneficial. The lecturer, on the contrary, refuses all there notions, mentioning colonization of asteroids is not practical. He further provides there explanations to support his view.
First the passage and the talk mention the idea of low gravity. In this line of thought, the author claims that asteroids have lower gravity compared to planets so it spave crafts can land easier on them, take of with less power required and it can carry more equipment. The lecturer, on the other hand, claims that the lower gravity of asteroids can presents some risk. He asserts that people going to the planets only for a few month mostly suffers from muscle and bone sickness. He further states that they usually lose muscle and their bone dencity reduced significantly.
Second the passage and the lecture mention the idea of mining valuable metals on asteroids. In the vein, the text claims that asteroids surface have been convered with valuable metals that can cover the expences of travel to them and the sponcers companey can make profit selling these metals. However, the lecturer states that the cost of supporting colonies on asteroids and transfering these metal to earth are too costly. Additionally, the price of metals must be remained same in order to sponcers can cover their expenses.
Third both the reading and the listening put forth the idea of asteroids orbit distance. While the author claims that asteroids are easy to reach since their orbit are closer to earh compared to mars or other planets, the lecturer refutes this notions. He further asserts that although asteroids are easy to reach, they are not easy to return from. Their orbit may get further in some point after the spacecarft landed on its surface and returning this spacecraft might be a challenging process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...teroids are beneficial. The lecturer, on the contrary, refuses all there notions,...
^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'few months'.
Suggestion: few months
... people going to the planets only for a few month mostly suffers from muscle and bone sic...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...ir orbit are closer to earh compared to mars or other planets, the lecturer refutes ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... or other planets, the lecturer refutes this notions. He further asserts that althou...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05810397554 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51165488344 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0378338394 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2941176471 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272333800788 0.272083759551 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833154236838 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497354853666 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160442249108 0.162205337803 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333055736325 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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