TPO 52- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars
The reading passage reveals that there are three reasons for humans to establish colonies on asteroids. However, the speaker does not agree with the perspectives presented in the reading passage.
First of all, the author considers that asteroids have lower gravity due to their size compared to planets, which leads to the safer approach to land on asteroids and the more possible way to carry more equipment to set up the colony. On top of that, the speaker states that lower gravity would cause those who land on the asteroids to lose strengths of muscle and bones. Therefore, it is not a practical way to carry out.
Second, the authors thinks that some asteroids are abundant in valuable rare metals that are profitable and can be a good source of these raw materials. In addition, the speaker contends that it is not a whole picture of mining valuable metals from asteroids. He says that the author does not consider the cost of transporting the metals back to Earth. Furthermore, if the metals was taken back to Earth, it would contribute the price of the metals to decrease because of the large quantity of metals coming out to the market.
Third, the author believes that some of asteroids are easier to each and more affordable than the Moon or Mars. Nevertheless, the speakers mentions that asteroids may move away from the original place, which lets the returning distance be longer.
In conclusion, opinions from the author and the speaker are extremely different.
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- Integrated writing-TPO 11 88
- TPO 52- Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars 3
- Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do yo agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the asteroids') or simply say ''some asteroids''.
Suggestion: some of the asteroids; some asteroids
...rket. Third, the author believes that some of asteroids are easier to each and more affordable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9203187251 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55919583884 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4862584236 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06452816374 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856798330803 0.272083759551 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299079022063 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300753245862 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444512289334 0.162205337803 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280557457218 0.0443174109184 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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