TPO 8 - Integrated
memoir that was written by Chevalier de Seingalt
The article states that critic claim that the chevalier distorted or invented many event in his memoir, and provide three reasons of support. however, the professor explains that memoir was acuurate and reliable, and refutes each of authors reasons.
First, the reading claims that chevalier actualy was poor and pretended to be wealthy and made parties and gambling to show this by borrowing money from swiss merchant. the professor refutes this point by saying that chevalier was not poor and he was selling his own properities to cover his actions and he bowrroed money until he recives money from selling.
Second, the article posits that the conversations with voltair was not accurate because its wrote many years after conversatons in memoir. however, the professor says that he wrote notes every night after conversations and kept notes for several yeas then used them in memoir .
Third, the reading says that his escaping from prison from sealing by piece of metal is not acuurate and jailers were bribed by politician to release him. the professor opposes this point by eplaining that where were other prisoners whom had friend with more powerfull politicians and non of them released. she states that soon after chevalier escaped the adminstrative of jail ordered to repair the sealing .
In conclusion, although the reading and the lecture both discuss chevalier memoir, the two/three main points made in the reading are effectively supported by the lecturer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun event seems to be countable; consider using: 'many events'.
Suggestion: many events
...hat the chevalier distorted or invented many event in his memoir, and provide three reason...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
..., and provide three reasons of support. however, the professor explains that memoir was...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...by borrowing money from swiss merchant. the professor refutes this point by saying ...
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Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...any years after conversatons in memoir. however, the professor says that he wrote notes...
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Line 13, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or several yeas then used them in memoir . Third, the reading says that hi...
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Line 19, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...re bribed by politician to release him. the professor opposes this point by eplaini...
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Line 19, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...l politicians and non of them released. she states that soon after chevalier escape...
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Line 19, column 408, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve of jail ordered to repair the sealing . In conclusion, although the readin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, then, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3417721519 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53335446413 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8009689741 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.6 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164481379192 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693451933941 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408165396247 0.0662205650399 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953521926165 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438324377758 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.