TPO integrated 44
There has been many debates among whether the coins that discovered in the united states are genuine historical pieces or not. The lecture claims that the coins is actually truly and not fake and they consider to be genuine historical pieces. However, the reading argues that the coins is fake and placed in America to mislead the public.
The first point of dispute is the great distance between the north settlement and the native American site. The lecture says that native American people are interested in collecting historical objects from far away places, for example, many other objects rather than the coins were found at the north America site. According to the professor, may be they travel to the north and brought the coins with them. However the reading refutes this point, it states that the distance between the main site and the north is thousands kilometers. S it was hard to get the coin from that far places.
Another controversial issue is that there was no other coin found at the Canadian site inhabited by the north. The lecture says that the north did not create permanent settlement in north America, they went back to Europe and on their way back the packed up all their stuff including the coins, that is why there were no coins found at the north. But, the reading refutes this point by stating that the north did not bring any coins with them to North America.
The final issue for the debate is that the coins were most likely with less important value to the north American people. The lecture contents that the north found that the coin were attractive to the North American people. They could use them in neckless or other type of jewelry.. Thus the North start to trade the coins with North American people. Yet, the reading disagrees. It claims that the north American did not recognize the silver coins as money.
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There has been many debates among whether the coins that dis...
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...whether the coins that discovered in the united states are genuine historical pie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76595744681 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18338657771 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455927051672 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6296000516 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2352941176 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06452816374 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54880197436 0.272083759551 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205982930391 0.0996497079465 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803853596645 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357903102796 0.162205337803 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571750670955 0.0443174109184 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.0289183223 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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