TPO23-Declination of Yellow cedar
The lecturer and the passage discuss hypothesis of the declining the yellow cedar. Although the passage claims that some hypothesis are caused the diclination of this treem the speaker refutes these ideas through a number of reasons which will be described in this report.
First of all, the passage points out that the powerful attack of the bark beetles could be the reason for this declination, the speaker, in contrast, rejects this idea by claiming that generally most of these trees have more insects and they have a powerful chemical matter which maintaning them. In addition, the bark beetles usually attack damage trees which will be dying either with or without their attack.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which states that the brown bear clawing to eat tree bark could be a treat since it might weak yellow cedars and destroy them, the speaker argues that virtually the brown bears have been extincted. Their population have been declining since years ago and they cannot be the cause of yellow cedars declination.
Finally, although the passage says that climate change might be a reason for this degradation due to the fact that cedar's roots start to growing in late winter which might damage them, the professor disagrees by mentioning that many trees die in lower temprature and more trees can die in versa vice condition. He also adds that this region has a relatively temprate weather and it does not affect the cedar's roots.
Througout the reasons which have been described above, the passage's claims are rejected by the professor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...esis of the declining the yellow cedar. Although the passage claims that some hypothesis...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cedars'' or 'cedar's'?
Suggestion: cedars'; cedar's
... and they cannot be the cause of yellow cedars declination. Finally, although the ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, so, in addition, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06589147287 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36986582882 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1657574358 49.2860985944 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405334428728 0.272083759551 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174444618475 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678196593855 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21509898597 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894164801851 0.0443174109184 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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