TPO40 integrated
The author of the passage holds that it is impossible for human to habitat on Venus because of its extreme conditions, while the lecturer in the lecture expresses an opposite view.
To begin with, the author claims that atmospheric pressure at Venus’ surface is so high that all spacecraft and humans that try to land on it would crush. However, the lecturer rebuts that instead of building station on land, it is more favorable to establish a floating station like balloon that floats at 50 km above the surface. In this way, the pressure problem can be perfectly solved since we all know that atmospheric pressure decreases with height. As a result, the pressure at 50 km above the planet’s surface is equal to that on earth, which causes no danger to our live.
Moreover, the author believes that water and oxygen do not exist on Venus and thereby need to be transferred from Earth, which is impractical. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes that we can produce water and oxygen out of the planet’s atmosphere compounds, carbon dioxide, nitrogen and sulfuric acid, through chemical process. Besides, the fact that those chemicals can be easily accessed from atmosphere makes it unnecessary to worry about generating water and oxygen of enough amount for the station mentioned above and human residents.
Finally, the author puts forward that there is very little sunlight reaches the Venus’ surface, ruling out the possibility that generating electricity through solar power. Instead, the lecturer retorts that the floating space station can also handle this task because it locates above the thick clouds that block 60% of sunlight. Also, with the use of it, we can collect both direct and reflected light at the same time, which facilitates not only the quantity but also the efficiency of electricity generation.
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 54
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather thanthe courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 66
- TPO40 independent Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 88
- TPO47 integrated 95
- TPO34 integrated 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, moreover, so, while, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14950166113 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67621944693 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.4236825886 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 140.909090909 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06452816374 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372118711832 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132596641675 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569874032908 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195783785209 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613581754165 0.0443174109184 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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