The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

These bar chart illustrates the mode of transport in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000 as indicated on the x- axis and also x- axis shows years with diverse colours.The y- axis indicates percentage of commuters from 0 to 45.

The number of people using trains at first rose from under 20% in 1960 to 26% in 1980,then feel back to about 23% in 2000.In 1960,car used less than other modes of transport,around 6%,but in 1980,it increased about 23% and in 2000,it reached above 35%,approximately 38%.Tube transport,in 1960,little over 25%,after this year it decreased around 22%,in 1980,and then rose to 25%.The popularity of buses has declined since 1960,falling from just under 35%in 1960 to 27% in 1980 and 15% in 2000.

The graph predicates the growing of use of cars increased from 1960 to 2000,approximately 30%.Use of buses fell from 37% to 15% from 1960 to 200.Other modes of transport,such as train and tube did not change more,train transport rose,around 4% and tube transport fell, approximately 3% during these 40 years.

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