The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The table indicates the figures of the British families possessed consumer durables from 1972 to 1983.
At first glance, there was a significant increase in telephone in Britain, from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983, an increase by 35% for more than 10 years, followed by central heating, only 39% in 1972 to 64% in 1983. By contrast, the least upward trend belonged to dishwasher, just 3% in 1978 to 5% in 1983 and this number was the least compared to other consumer durables of the category. Television was responsible for the leading figure, with 93% in 1972 and 98% in 1983, although there was only five percentage increase during this period. The second place was ranked by vacuum cleaner, 87% in 1972 to 95% in 1982, a rise by 8% during a decade, whereas dishwasher was accounted for the smallest data, just starting at 3% in 1978 to 5% in 1983. Particularly, video had not appeared until 1983, after that it constituted for 18% in 1983.
It is concluded that British families used television the most, followed by vacuum cleaner. Meanwhile, dishwasher was the least figure.
Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
---|---|---|---|
2019-12-03 | mone49 | 89 | view |
2019-08-01 | aimsonlyband6 | 73 | view |
2018-06-27 | Prabhjot singh Grewal | 56 | view |
2016-12-06 | oberk | 78 | view |
2016-12-06 | jimpan | 73 | view |
- Young drivers are careless and overconfident and too many people are killed in accidents To eliminate this problem we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 48
- Advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone s life Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is negative Discuss both views and give your own opinion 80
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down resta 53
- Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspaper and TV has bad influences so this kind of information should be restricted on the media To what extent do you agree or disagree 40
- Some people believe that students should be allowed to evaluate and criticise their teachers to improve the quality of education Others think this is disrespectful to teachers Discuss both views give your opinion and include relevant examples 87
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 188 200
No. of Characters: 847 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.505 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.608 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.052 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.45 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4