The Table shows various home electronic devices owned in Britain from years 1972 to 1983. Numbers are given in percentages. Overall TV is the major group which is found almost in every home.
Central heating was found in only 33 percentage of houses in 1972, which has increased steadily during timescale and almost doubled till 1983 with 64%. Telephone showed also similar increase throughout years, in fact only 42% of houses had telephone in 1972, and this number rose to 77% in 1982. Household appliances like refrigerator and washing machine showed roughly similar pattern, they increased from 73% in 1972 to 94% in 1983.
Coming up to vacuum cleaners, roughly 90 percent of people owned them in 1972, which has increased to 95% in 1982. The data for vacuum cleaners in 1983 is unfortunately missing.
Dishwashers were not available till late 70’es, and ownership increased from 3% in 1978 to 5% of houses in 1983, similarly videos were not found from 1972 to 1982, yet in contrast to dishwashers it increased from zero in 1982 to 18% in 1983.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57986780833 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0079644427 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17488477003 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790542070601 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762015353228 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111737162042 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317514975963 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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