You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter:
•apologize for the mistake
•find out how important the book is to him / her
•say what you will do
Dear. Jackson,
How have you been these days? I hope that you and your family are well. I am just writing to tell you that I still have your book “Knowing nursing”.
I am so sorry for not giving the book back. I borrowed this book last final examination. However, as you know, I had to move to other place after the examination. Due to this, I was so busy and physically exhausted. Also, I have not opened moving boxes for a while and now I realised it.
I know that this book is really important for you. I have heard that you dropped the nursing course in order to attend the course in your country, China. I guess that you need this book.
Definitely, I will post this book to your country. You don’t have to worry about the postage fee because I will surely pay all the charge. I would take a week for the international postage. If you need the book urgent, I will send it as express. Just let me know.
Again, I am sorry for the book.
Speak soon,
Eun
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flaws:
More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'I, They, We...') as the subject of a sentence.
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 10
No. of Words: 186 200
No. of Characters: 735 1000
No. of Different Words: 102 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.693 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.952 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.095 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 33 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 22 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 9 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.789 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.697 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.386 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.224 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4