tpo25
The reading claims that it is not likely that the vessels, which are clay jar contained a copper cylinder surrounding an iron rode, were actually used as electric batteries in ancient times. It provides three reasons of support. In contrast, the professor states that the arguments in the passage are not convincing and the explanation that these vessels were used as batteries is correct. She refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article avers that if the vessels were used as batteries, they would probably have been attached to some electricity conductors such as metal wires but there were not any metal wires near the vessels. However, the professor opposes this point by saying that the vessels were discovered by local people and they may find another materials near the vessels but they couldn't recognize them. In fact, She mentions that these materials may serve as conductores but they were thrown away.
Second, the passage asserts that the copper cylinders inside the jars look exactly like copper cylinders discovered in the ruins of Seleucia and they were used them for holding scrolls of sacred texts so the vessels could be used as the same purpose. On the other hand, the speaker counters this point by stating that this does not approve that the vessels were used as holders. Actually, she argues that the copper originated for that purpose but then the people adapted to use the copper to generate electricity.
Third, the article posits that what could ancient people have done with the electricity that the vessels were supposed to have generated? because they had no devices to use it. Conversely, the lecturer casts doubt on this point by explaining that the batteries shock was generated when somebody touch it and this is invisible power that people used it as magic. In addition, she affirms that they might use this electricity for healing as today because it stimulates muscles to relieve pain, and anceint people may use batteries for the same purpose.
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but there were not any metal wires near the vessels.
but there were no any metal wires near the vessels.
Sentence: However, the professor opposes this point by saying that the vessels were discovered by local people and they may find another materials near the vessels but they couldn't recognize them.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and materials
the copper originated for that purpose
the copper is originated for that purpose
when somebody touch it
when somebody touches it
Sentence: In fact, She mentions that these materials may serve as conductores but they were thrown away.
Error: conductores Suggestion: conductors
Sentence: In addition, she affirms that they might use this electricity for healing as today because it stimulates muscles to relieve pain, and anceint people may use batteries for the same purpose.
Error: anceint Suggestion: ancient
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 334 250
No. of Characters: 1631 1200
No. of Different Words: 168 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.275 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.883 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.349 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.38 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.593 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.176 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4