Animals are killed and consumed for human needs. Some people consider this as cruel. However, others consider this as mandatory. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether killing animals and consuming them for human needs is cruel or mandatory. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and I offer or express my own perspective.
On the one hand, some ethical vegetarians who support animal rights assert that animal slaughter for human consumption is brutal. The main reason is that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of unnecessary torture, suffering or cruelty, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. The animals we slaughter for food are extremely intelligent and sensitive creat...
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