Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the busy and crowded world we should not expect people to be polite to each other

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.

Nowadays, we live in a busy and crowded world, so people may ignore manners. Furthermore, some may think impoliteness is acceptable; however, according to following reasons and some of my personal experiences, I still believe that we can expect people to be polite to each other.

First, people want to success, and polite people can impress others. Take me, a founder of a start-up company, for example. I meet all kinds of people every day and most of them are my clients. Furthermore, to promote my products successfully, I have to act politely. To be more specific, before I visit my clients, I...

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being polite make people like to give hands.
being polite makes people like to give hands.

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More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.

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