The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This first diagrams shows the process and tools needed to produce cement, while the second diagram illustrates how to make a concrete out of cement for building and housing work. It can be seen that, creating cement involves complex processes and concrete production is done using, water, cement, gravel, sand and a mixer.
To begin the cement-making process the limestone and clay crushed together by a crusher to formed powder. Then the powder passed through a mixer and goes directly to a rotating small turbine with constant heat, this process creates the raw cement material to be passed on a grinder to finally produce the cement. Finally, the cement is ready to packed and sell.
The second diagram presents how a cement is made for concrete production. In the first stage, the 15% cement, 10% water, quarter sand and 50% of small stones or gravel are poured together in a concrete mixer. Then the machine rotates very fast to produce concrete.
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the limestone and clay crushed together by a crusher to formed powder.
the limestone and clay are crushed together by a crusher to form powder.
Sentence: Finally, the cement is ready to packed and sell.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and packed
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