Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Art defines a main aspect of culture of a nation. Thus a flourishing and active creativity is important to maintain a nation's identity. In looking at what could be done to maintain a good artistic background, the question arises as to whether government funding is really necessary? Some people believe that it is essential that government funds arts, as without government funding art would not flourish. However it is the belief of some other group that, with government intervention it threatens the integrity of arts. The latter concept has arisen mainly due to the government censoring. However I believe that it is necessary that enough government funding is provided so that it strengthen the arts field.
When we say government funding, along with financial support there comes restrictions and regulations posed on arts. These restrictions and regulations include government censoring; that is not allowing for public display of art that the government feel that is unethical, unacceptable in society and culture and to avoid discrimination on a particular social group. These regulations are mainly forced in order to maintain ethics, peace in society and also to protect children. To what extent and based on what limits should this government censoring be performed is a question. Some artists believe that with censoring they are unable to bring out the true artistic concept of their creation and thus restricts them from expressing their ideas. Therefore they argue that government funding does not actually help to maintain the integrity of arts and prevent them from providing the public with true art.
However, the question is can art really survive and flourish without government funding? Even though government restrictions can affect the quality of arts in some way, I believe that art would in no way survive without the help from government funding. There are many situations in which artists struggle economically. Most of the time, financial deprivation hold many artists from converting their creative minds into art that can speak up. In these cases it is important that government do provide financial assistance for the artists and only through that can quality art would remain. Otherwise there would be a monopoly with only privileged artists and privileged social groups engaged. Also it is important that government fund arts schools at an affordable rate so the upcoming talents can be blossomed to make sure a younger generation of quality artists are there to follow up. Otherwise the quality of art can degrade for generations and it would be really difficult to uplift the quality and back again. Also government funding is necessary to acknowledge the artists as otherwise they would not be encourage and some can even leave the field as there isn't any recognition for their work. These factors indicate the important role the government funding plays in maintaining the quality of art.
Art is a soothing and relaxation experience for human mind. Quality art can provide great entertainment to the general public. A society that can value art is a sensitive, creative, imaginative . Therefore it is important that art flourishes so that quality art is born and it is available to general public. To maintain this level of art government funding would be really necessary.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247848537005 0.238963963785 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.163511187608 0.154291517835 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0929432013769 0.0886310499679 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481927710843 0.0506014161523 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378657487091 0.0449626384858 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123924268503 0.123526278965 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0327022375215 0.0379742944744 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86868710049 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292598967298 0.0316879551592 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00516351118761 0.0014075125626 367% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0895008605852 0.0950106342287 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0309810671256 0.0245489744465 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0154905335628 0.0157978311181 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3335.0 2899.98275862 115% => OK
No of words: 534.0 478.390804598 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24531835206 6.0591788892 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.65681771538 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398876404494 0.369966551584 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338951310861 0.285172536893 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220973782772 0.207245337619 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174157303371 0.136322040163 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86868710049 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 234.298850575 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434456928839 0.492565540709 88% => OK
Word variations: 50.388569161 56.8184620615 89% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 21.1264367816 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0714285714 23.7468607788 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7927201014 62.0618507366 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.107142857 143.81877709 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 23.7468607788 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.728815259664 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.71264367816 169% => OK
Readability: 52.9665596576 52.2641144681 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.62068965517 1.64547068916 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.585666765335 0.39480681544 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129536187894 0.11556216369 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0709804059472 0.0736162880345 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474775363999 0.531340600358 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134987416393 0.15197228837 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207378515777 0.158818324754 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117220286401 0.0851127212816 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.452914398454 0.388921930462 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00664888176581 0.0677916285025 10% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.429710560864 0.28015025965 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129201224866 0.0610219844235 212% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.8591954023 147% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30459770115 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.96264367816 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.10632183908 173% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.93390804598 127% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.04597701149 197% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 15.0862068966 166% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.0 Out of 6