Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
The world currently is at the crossroads between the traditional values and the modern new age developments. On one hand people want to hold on to what has existed for many centuries yet on the other hand people the best of modern living standards. And to attain all this we need to put in a lot of efforts to better our finances.
The youth is the time when a child grows into a young adult and starts to understand how the world around works. The various materialist things beyond the toys exist around us. How these things provide us the comforts and the enjoyment. The joy of owning a radio controlled flying toy or the latest push bike with gears and shock absorbents is much more attracting than the old age mechanical toy or a simple bicycle.
To be able to fulfill these demands the parents today have to work much longer and harder. Which implies the parents are spending less time with their children and more time working. This eventually leads to a young man with more wants and desires, by hook or by crook, as there is no one to guide then between the right and the wrong.
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'then', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235849056604 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.150943396226 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0990566037736 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0424528301887 0.0501214627716 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0235849056604 0.0437548338989 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103773584906 0.122226691241 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0283018867925 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33760026523 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0518867924528 0.0326793684256 159% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.146226415094 0.0861772015684 170% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.011925033212 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1090.0 1933.35771543 56% => OK
No of words: 200.0 316.048096192 63% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45 6.12580529183 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20517956788 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275 0.374742101984 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.165 0.28420135186 58% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.105 0.203846283523 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.075 0.137316102897 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33760026523 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.037074148 72% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 63.3698499699 60.7387585426 104% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2323783823 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.814263465372 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 36.5 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.69565217391 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309320481243 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118852268316 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651668387533 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60496649071 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0956618563423 0.148594505496 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147100910027 0.134430193775 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524787842845 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365220206902 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00197802450279 0.0638462369009 3% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218799061102 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043559532497 0.058150111329 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 50.5617977528 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 9