Laws should not be rigid or fixed. Instead, they should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Laws are fixed to bring the equality to all the people in the society. So every citizen in the country or state will follow the rules which were set by the government. In my perspective laws should not be flexible which will lead to vulnerability of law.
Since the law is fixed the people will think twice before committing a mistake. The laws should be unbiased so there will not any distinction made between the poor citizens and elite citizens. For example: people who are taking loans from the government have to repay the money within the stipulated time which, not paying loans will lead you the public defaulter. But if you take vijay mallaya he has millions of debt to bank but he is still free and enjoying because he is elite citizen and business man. If any middle class or poor people who haven’t pay the debt then it would be different. Even the law is fixed there is some sort of flexibility to elite people. If the law was flexible then it will be different to manage the state which leads to law and order problems.
Secondly if you take child marriage it was so common in India, which a boy will marry a girl at young which leads serious problem as early motherhood for girls, less option for the education. As time changes a law has been imposed on child marriage which a boy/girl should not get married before 18 years of their age. It has changed life of many girls where got opportunity to educate themselves and stand strong in public. Thus without fixed law this cannot be possible.
However there should be some flexibility in law but not loopholes. For example: if people defend themselves from others then fixed laws cannot be solution and the people who are not mentally stable like multiple personality disorder then it will be difficult because people were not acting themselves at the situation.
Finally I conclude that laws should be fixed or rigid, which help the government to run the state peacefully, at some cases it can be flexible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... will lead to vulnerability of law. Since the law is fixed the people will think ...
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... themselves and stand strong in public. Thus without fixed law this cannot be possib...
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...ut fixed law this cannot be possible. However there should be some flexibility in law...
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Suggestion: Finally,
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'for example', 'sort of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222811671088 0.238963963785 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.177718832891 0.154291517835 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0886310499679 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0716180371353 0.0506014161523 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0477453580902 0.0449626384858 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100795755968 0.123526278965 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0397877984085 0.0379742944744 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42570801677 2.82910677849 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.026525198939 0.0316879551592 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0928381962865 0.0950106342287 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0450928381963 0.0245489744465 184% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0318302387268 0.0157978311181 201% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1986.0 2899.98275862 68% => OK
No of words: 351.0 478.390804598 73% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65811965812 6.0591788892 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.65681771538 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293447293447 0.369966551584 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196581196581 0.285172536893 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14245014245 0.207245337619 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0826210826211 0.136322040163 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42570801677 2.82910677849 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 234.298850575 77% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.492565540709 104% => OK
Word variations: 54.311219305 56.8184620615 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 21.1264367816 80% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6470588235 23.7468607788 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4220251759 62.0618507366 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.823529412 143.81877709 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 23.7468607788 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.728815259664 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.71264367816 78% => OK
Readability: 40.3051784816 52.2641144681 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.22321428571 1.64547068916 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24786289618 0.39480681544 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106419442694 0.11556216369 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.059429520829 0.0736162880345 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545778884023 0.531340600358 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183503222871 0.15197228837 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113191325905 0.158818324754 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811771018041 0.0851127212816 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27376632856 0.388921930462 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125160033005 0.0677916285025 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190361264349 0.28015025965 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538196111103 0.0610219844235 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.8591954023 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30459770115 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.10632183908 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.93390804598 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 15.0862068966 113% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.0 Out of 6