There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents. As a result, some politicians have suggeested that people should take regular driving tests thorughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat driving tests? Do these outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The growing amount of accidents have taken many lives in our society. Thus, It gave rise to a controversy and many politicians have suggested people regularly take driving exams throughout their lives. In my opinion, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On this essay, I will explain my stand on my position and include relevant examples.
It is an indisputable fact that safeness in a country has been a substantial concern and obligation of the politicians in the government. Hence, we cannot contradict to the suggestion due to the fact that majority will likely benefit on this condition. To begin with, certain possibilities will induce the increase of driving standards if followed regularly as the drivers will be expected for reevaluation of capacity. Therefore, would possibly increase the country's reputation as a result of the decrease in the rate of car accidents. Simultaneously, consistent up-to-date rules and regulations will assume discipline to all drivers and ensure an effective road management. For instance, reducing vehicles by implementing car companies for carpooling will certainly make development against the pressing problems brought by traffic and global warming.
Furthermore, allowing infrequent driving and unsoundness for irregular and elderly drivers may cause some serious threat to the society. It is inevitable if an individual who lacks utilization to a particular machinery to eventually cause inefficient control. Similarly to this case, It is an advantage for the irregular drivers to be amended by laws for proper reassessment likewise for the elderly who must undergo examination for proper health and wellness in order to qualify.
In conclusion, I would say that the implementation of regular driving test would give a relief to the nation provided that compliance from the people must be ensured to achieve less accident case in the country.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270769230769 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147692307692 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338461538462 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04 0.0437548338989 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126153846154 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0492307692308 0.0403226058552 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20238348465 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.04 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.107692307692 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.04 0.021408717616 187% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00615384615385 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1951.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.61355932203 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.440677966102 0.374742101984 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.376271186441 0.28420135186 132% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.28813559322 0.203846283523 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196610169492 0.137316102897 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20238348465 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.8217920439 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4793003909 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.357142857 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.814263465372 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 58.6985472155 49.1944974215 119% => OK
Elegance: 2.01388888889 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235160224446 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113122725703 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758285812343 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540011313048 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165733054521 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105628073283 0.134430193775 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581598995455 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284555612876 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0578476699158 0.0638462369009 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169128073649 0.228012699653 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612266648086 0.058150111329 105% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9