The best way for a society to prepare people for leadership in government industry or the field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not compeition

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The best way for a society to prepare people for leadership in government industry or the field is by instilling in them sense of cooperation not compeition

As all we know that if you want to make best leader in any field you must have the leader qulities like confident, wisely desicion capacity, control on anger and more more important is Cooperation. Good leader is one who having capacity to understand the people views and problems and find out the best solution for any problem by giving it cooperation to them. The best example is Dr. Babasaheb Ambedkar who is the creater of the Indian Constituion Rules. He was very powerful iconocastic leader in past year of India. He was helped the people who belongs to the lower caste catagory. He was alway fight against the higer caste people like Bhraman, Maratha who not allowed the lower cast people in the temple, in their home, lower caste people not having facility to study.

Dr Ambedkar understand their problem and help them by writing the constitution Rules which provide the all rights to lower caste people like reservation in education, Government job. Beacuse ofhis coopration all this can be happened in Indian.

So if you want to your Nation at good postion then you must have stronger leader and stronger leader must be have qulity cooperation.

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Sentence: As all we know that if you want to make best leader in any field you must have the leader qulities like confident, wisely desicion capacity, control on anger and more more important is Cooperation.
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Sentence: Good leader is one who having capacity to understand the people views and problems and find out the best solution for any problem by giving it cooperation to them.
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Sentence: He was alway fight against the higer caste people like Bhraman, Maratha who not allowed the lower cast people in the temple, in their home, lower caste people not having facility to study.
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Sentence: Dr Ambedkar understand their problem and help them by writing the constitution Rules which provide the all rights to lower caste people like reservation in education, Government job.
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Sentence: As all we know that if you want to make best leader in any field you must have the leader qulities like confident, wisely desicion capacity, control on anger and more more important is Cooperation.
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Error: qulities Suggestion: qualities

Sentence: The best example is Dr. Babasaheb Ambedkar who is the creater of the Indian Constituion Rules.
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Sentence: He was very powerful iconocastic leader in past year of India.
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Sentence: He was helped the people who belongs to the lower caste catagory.
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Sentence: He was alway fight against the higer caste people like Bhraman, Maratha who not allowed the lower cast people in the temple, in their home, lower caste people not having facility to study.
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Sentence: Beacuse ofhis coopration all this can be happened in Indian.
Error: coopration Suggestion: cooperation
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Sentence: So if you want to your Nation at good postion then you must have stronger leader and stronger leader must be have qulity cooperation.
Error: qulity Suggestion: quality
Error: postion Suggestion: position

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