People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. What do you think is the best way of reducing stress?
Life difficulties definitely come in many different forms and shapes. They can be painful or sweet as well. No one in the world can escape some kind of difficulties, which accompany us in whole life with stress. In fact, every mature human has to admit that life will be without stress and difficulties. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether in what ways people escape from stress in their life. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that there are vast majorities of activity, which people can rely on in order to decrease their stress. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, people all around the globe confront trials and tribulations that accompany them in every single facet of their lives. Scientifically speaking, although with development of technology earth has been better place to live and people are able to handle every sophisticated problems, there are significant activities, which is hard to solve for people and come up with stress. Delving further into the issue reveals that hardly ever can people escape such stress due to the fact that difficulties and stress accompany every human being in different realm. Actually stress not only can prevent people from doing activity but also can have harmful effects on people's health such as heart disease. Indeed, crowds of people are looking for some ways to decline the stress in their life such as exercise, which not only will people reduce their stress but also patronize them to lead a healthy lifestyle. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that people who were more likely to face difficulties and stress and decrease them with extra activates such as reading novel or watching movies have been more successful and healthy in their lives.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that spending valuable time with family can be the nice solution in order to decline stress. Broadly speaking, nowadays, which life has trials and tribulations with full of stress, hardly ever people spend their precious time with their family. To put it in other word, family play a pivotal role in people lives and when people meet their family, not only are they able to throw their stress away but also enjoy their life with cool member of their family. However, what I alluded above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, many people are not able to reduce their stress with extra activities such as exercise and being with family and so forth. In fact, crowds of people prefer to confront with difficulties and deal with stress and make an effort to solve the problems in order to diminish stress. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, in today's hectic world, which life has trials and tribulations, many people have to face with difficulties and deal with stress. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that extra activities such as exercise not only can reduce stress significantly but also can maintain people in a healthy life. In addition, spending precious time with family is of the alternative solution, which allows people throw their stress away.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246815286624 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.154458598726 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0891719745223 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0748407643312 0.046263068375 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445859872611 0.0685040099705 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125796178344 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0366242038217 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65215167489 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334394904459 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0031847133758 0.00188951952338 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.0573248407643 0.0887237588012 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207006369427 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0207006369427 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3479.0 2387.08602151 146% => OK
No of words: 575.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05043478261 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366956521739 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227826086957 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106086956522 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65215167489 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.9887669031 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7198614502 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.260869565 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.652173913043 0.644075263715 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 47.7826086957 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.49418604651 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3184594081 0.300154397459 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102364910606 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0668631061465 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483835827615 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150228527453 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133831788737 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654569621691 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.568804900087 0.336927656856 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449172582819 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262936288559 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278734405314 0.0618886996521 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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