YOUR NEIGHBOR HAS RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU A COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR FLAT/HOUSE.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing a letter of apology to you with regards to the noise here in my house last Tuesday evening. The reason behind it was that my daughter and my niece are fighting. I was in the market that time that is why I was not able to scold them.
I really want to say sorry about that incident. It is such a disappointment. I know it cause a lot of damage to you especially to your son who was studying that time for his upcoming teacher’s board exam. I hope that the good relationship we had before as a neighbor will still be the same despite of what happened. I rest assure you that this will not be repeated again. My daughter and my niece are already aware that if ever they will do that again, a punishment will be given to them. Also, I did some house implementation for them to be aware and to prevent this kind of cases. Again, I am so sorry about that and I am humbly asking for your forgiveness. Thank you and God bless.
Yours sincerly,
Darl Regine B. Nermal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
... It is such a disappointment. I know it cause a lot of damage to you especially to yo...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l be the same despite of what happened. I rest assure you that this will not be r...
^
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
...I rest assure you that this will not be repeated again. My daughter and my niece are already a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206572769953 0.220444632235 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.159624413146 0.167888034529 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.037558685446 0.0606518309736 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0657276995305 0.0506257000042 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.140845070423 0.118615021944 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107981220657 0.107062808482 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0328638497653 0.041066498444 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50760561841 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0422535211268 0.0385302599488 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.075117370892 0.0714148451538 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018779342723 0.0191574576366 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0234741784038 0.00930345855455 252% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1001.0 1141.60824742 88% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.134020619 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21354166667 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.223958333333 0.284621296913 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.130208333333 0.211203875043 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.09375 0.133321485273 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0572916666667 0.0843313296314 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50760561841 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.622163163488 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.6113518076 62.8969750728 88% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.7692307692 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1514054026 44.7399317507 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 90.9928171075 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.613754768223 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 27.7900641026 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 0.948717948718 1.13073093955 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269572375698 0.331212695627 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101789353615 0.0927372745006 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0736818372177 0.0736520305886 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462895688837 0.579516596996 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20940836129 0.180689518051 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902712727795 0.122183219658 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654533726397 0.0765303033291 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193517153839 0.211926503985 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.193517153839 0.0737400523855 262% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145740033955 0.203819188451 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103302030335 0.067151250289 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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