The chart below shows the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart on the left depicts the percentage of global oil resources distributed region wise. While the bar chart on the right represents the rate of annual consumption in the same areas. Generally, more than half of the world resources are present in the Middle East. However, greater than 50% of oil is utilized by Asia and United State.
Worldwide oil reservoirs vary, with the Middle East on the top having nearly 56% of the total. It is followed by Canada and, Central and South America with the figures of 14.84% and about eight percent respectively. In contrast, the remaining countries of the world, in combination, are responsible for less than one-fifth of total resources.
On the contrary, Asia alone utilizes greater than one-fourth of global oil annually, it is followed by United State with a percentage consumption of 25. In addition, Western Europe consumes about one-fifth. All the other areas of the globe use less than 30% when combined.
To sum up, only three regions have reservoirs higher than their rate of consumption while, all other parts of the word have fewer resources. However, only the Eastern Europe has utilization rate that balances its production.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'on the contrary', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.309734513274 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.0929203539823 0.116061578633 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0884955752212 0.0759168565197 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398230088496 0.0366838410393 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176991150442 0.0131127313244 135% => OK
Prepositions: 0.172566371681 0.155750635184 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0265486725664 0.0379272487307 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69136079286 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00442477876106 0.0210936926555 21% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00442477876106 0.00175180941692 253% => OK
Determiners: 0.0973451327434 0.0948980150116 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.00967000014798 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1210.0 1161.00487805 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1421319797 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350253807107 0.337110787985 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248730964467 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192893401015 0.171178102325 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152284263959 0.112407865282 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69136079286 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593908629442 0.546246751206 109% => OK
Word variations: 56.1714953276 49.3433353143 114% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4166666667 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3951762861 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 23.0094962315 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 41.2897631134 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 3.38235294118 2.94281807926 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.545285561559 0.418131533498 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112842169734 0.181151798455 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0950079543842 0.0850326197045 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.593467338648 0.706616315825 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154414423283 0.157042692854 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254806576121 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142022105413 0.108899403657 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385870665836 0.367819155151 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.137549780793 0.0812612215331 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37470358301 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154567424021 0.0921553760075 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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