A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
No individual is perfect and there is always room for improvement.Learning from mistakes makes a person a better human being, but the degree of loss due to the mistake decides whether the guilty can be exonerated.Crime is one such mistake which can't be dealt with leniency because it involves either disrupting the lives or intruding into the freedom of other individuals.But, the question lies in, how should the guilty be punished?
On one hand we witness stringent laws regarding crimes such as rape, murder, etc in countries in the middle east, where lynching, castration are some of the adopted ways of retribution which would definitely not offer a second chance to the criminal.While on the other hand,we face situations in countries like India, where no sudden judgements are passed and justice may come after years of trials.Be it a minor offence to crimes such as rape, justice is delayed and it is a known fact that justice delayed is justice denied.The Nirbhaya rape case is one such example, where the perpetrators should have been immediately castrated for the gruesome act they commit irrespective of their age.In such cases, these criminals should be left over to the public, that would definitely justify the justice needed.It its during these acts of crime that it must be ensured that the criminals are unable to retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labour.
Rights must be considered as a privilege for these criminals so that they value these rights and also the rights exercised by others.In India, till they aren't given a medicine for their acts, nothing will deter them from committing such morbid acts again.
However, it must be kept in mind that the main objective of punishments is penitence or the sense of regret that individuals must accept.Though a crime may have been commit knowingly, but sometimes circumstances are such that it doesn't leave an individual with a choice, in those cases punishments are given accordingly.Stringent laws always don't work to an advantage for a country, flexibility is needed because every crime has a different story to tell.
Therefore, the nature of crime should be the most important deciding factor and only a close inspection of the case and give the best solution as a method for justice.A gruesome act of violence commit knowingly should be dealt with utmost seriousness as these individuals are a threat to the society and are the ones who don't respect the rights of others.Hence, they must be taught to first respect their own.Other acts can be dealt with relevant punishments.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244541484716 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.174672489083 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.089519650655 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393013100437 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414847161572 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117903930131 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0545851528384 0.0406280797675 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9326889188 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218340611354 0.030933414821 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117903930131 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0371179039301 0.0249443105267 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174672489083 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2591.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 431.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01160092807 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348027842227 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238979118329 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169373549884 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134570765661 0.132149295362 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9326889188 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53596287703 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 61.9834852587 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 86.2 23.380412469 369% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 240.726400713 59.4972553346 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 518.2 141.124799967 367% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.2 23.380412469 369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 0.674092028746 445% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.21349557522 460% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 110.097911833 51.4728631049 214% => OK
Elegance: 1.63247863248 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317882546367 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.21495755314 0.123202303941 174% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773688357859 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.32844619916e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186766620543 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672218746453 0.0892212321368 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.244300894641 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108611032301 0.0692045440612 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186766620543 0.275328986314 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672218746453 0.0653680567796 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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