People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People's behavior, in general will be vacillating, they wont be in a position to fix on to their own decision. They will pondering on a particular issue, whether the decision they have taken is correct or wrong. This is the vulnerable point, giving scope for other opinions to be forced on oneself. People's behavior detours from their own making when they rely on others for each situation they faces.
Its good to be guided by people when one is not in a position to take a correct step, but people are of two types. The former one is who gives suggestions, depicting the pros and cons, and allowing the other to choose his own decision based on the options. If it goes in this way, then though one takes opinion of others, he/she ultimately follows their own one. The later type of people needs his/her opinion to be final and they just pressurize their thoughts on that person.
Depending on the different types of people around us, our behavior changes whether its our own decision or its others. As India is a democratic country, one has the rule to right and elect their leader. Thus, people will be influenced by particular actions, speeches of a group and they will be mislead to vote for them, even though they have thought to vote for other group. Its all the words which influences one most and that is considered as external force.
Forcing people that their opinion is right and everyone will be following it, and so even you should follow it, then a person's behavior is largely determined by forces than their own making, which is quite common in these days. If one allows the person to think about the issue, it depends on his own making.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'ponder'
Suggestion: ponder
...fix on to their own decision. They will pondering on a particular issue, whether the deci...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
... rely on others for each situation they faces. Its good to be guided by people whe...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...around us, our behavior changes whether its our own decision or its others. As Indi...
^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fluenced by particular actions, speeches of a group and they will be mislead to v...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...nd so even you should follow it, then a persons behavior is largely determined by force...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.185975609756 0.240241500013 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.173780487805 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0884146341463 0.0880659088768 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0396341463415 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0975609756098 0.0444667217837 219% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115853658537 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0518292682927 0.0406280797675 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34258812813 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335365853659 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0762195121951 0.0997080785238 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182926829268 0.0249443105267 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015243902439 0.0148568991511 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1667.0 2732.02544248 61% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63175675676 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320945945946 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216216216216 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128378378378 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0675675675676 0.132149295362 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34258812813 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 54.8998551208 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1428571429 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2953745808 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 42.7644787645 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.13725490196 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383779385272 0.391690518653 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.079853400576 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0447757934807 0.077325440228 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521973047273 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102674145367 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148385624987 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611309739294 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32639916884 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0599701180145 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263737506232 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631326809425 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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