The best way to create leaders is to make them for cooperation not cooperation
Author is claiming that by instilling young people for cooperation rather than competition is a way to prepare leadership in them. I am not totally agree with the author's claim because competition is also equally as important as cooperation.
Firstly author is saying about young people true that young people should be motivated for cooperation and and other leadership quallities but not at a cost of competition because competition will make a person to do better than others and it will make him better than what he was yesterday. Cooperation can be implied by making a group of young people in schools and colleges and then competition between these groups so it will eventually develop both leadership and a gist to be the best group of the particular school or college.
Secondly i will say many successful leaders are also a very great competitior, for example an anecdote of "Mr.Narendra Modi"'s speech that the competition is the best thing which will make you the best out of the rest. We can say that cooperation is important but it should be the part of the competition and both together will lead to the brighter future.
Thirdly if competition is needed in each field, for example automobile, industry, politics, government etc. Due to Competition the person or a company will try to be the best out of the rest. They will do all possible things they can to make their company at the top. For any industry it is most important to be aquiscenes about the new technology and to be upgraded with the new world.
Fourthly leadership is also directly connected to the competition. Assume a leader of a political party when it comes to election time if he has not learn the rules of competition then he will not be able to make his party win in the election. Though he is having great skills about politics and very great person to lead the party but if he is not able to absorb the stress of competition, he will surely fail.
Lastly I will conclued cooperation should be an essential part of a person's growth and to make him a better leader cooperation is must but competition will make him strong and it will generate a quality to do the best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...thors claim because competition is also equally as important as cooperation. Firstly a...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ple should be motivated for cooperation and and other leadership quallities but not at ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ticular school or college. Secondly i will say many successful leaders are al...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... competitior, for example an anecdote of 'Mr.Narendra Modi's speech tha...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Narendra
...r, for example an anecdote of 'Mr.Narendra Modi's speech that the competition...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...it comes to election time if he has not learn the rules of competition then he will n...
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Line 11, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ration should be an essential part of a persons growth and to make him a better leader ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cop
...ll generate a quality to do the best. cop
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239608801956 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146699266504 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0831295843521 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562347188264 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0586797066015 0.0444667217837 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112469437653 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0268948655257 0.0406280797675 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83079084821 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039119804401 0.030933414821 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105134474328 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0488997555012 0.0249443105267 196% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00733496332518 0.0148568991511 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2188.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 382.0 452.878318584 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7277486911 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316753926702 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217277486911 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164921465969 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123036649215 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83079084821 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 219.290929204 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452879581152 0.48968727796 92% => OK
Word variations: 47.5348349383 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4666666667 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.131294936 59.4972553346 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.866666667 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.674092028746 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 47.1944153578 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.44859813084 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41686456647 0.391690518653 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121852707263 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.098545547764 0.077325440228 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683352073157 0.547984918172 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173424621002 0.149214159877 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179675365536 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757678204592 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337042718914 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0744417741891 0.0692045440612 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271916545585 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447623468035 0.0653680567796 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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