All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiency. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
The author say in issue,Company hire the consultants too suggest how the compay is more efficiently work.I agree in this issue because Company can not juage the own skills about the working. so, it can hire persons for juage the how it will be growing up and how to more efficient before it's working?
Firstly,In this issue any compay have grow is so less, so it will be check the What are the fault in compay so, it cannot be grow fastly.some compay have own empoly it can check company but employ are not explain loyal issue compay because if employ can suggest the bad working in compay so it have been his job is no more as per comment is bad. So compay worker always say the good qulity but it cannot explain bad comment to the compay.so outside commers are required for leagal issue check and expalin the why the compay is not grow and how to solve?They can responce are loyaly to the compay.
Seconly,Company consults the outside worker for the checking so, this person do not have any good respose they have only explain the what is the problem occuring in compay and how to solve this problum.For Example,Outside worker find the issue in compay so it will check and examine the all problem like worker can not work properly,Work is not complited in time etc. so, it will all explain the problem occuring in the compay to the owner.
Thirdly,It will be response if the compay any issue so Owner can go to the woker and direcly speak what is a problem in comapy so, worker are easy to explain his problem for work.If compay have solve the all problem is doing in compay so compay are automaticaly growing up as the comparisan.
In this issue,I conclude that If the comapany check the respose of the consults and solve the problem are occuring in the worker as per minimum time so,comapy have efficiency more than and fastly growing up in the market.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229110512129 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.180592991914 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0566037735849 0.0880659088768 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.078167115903 0.0497285424764 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431266846361 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11051212938 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0323450134771 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4105660454 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215633423181 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00539083557951 0.0016655270985 324% => OK
Determiners: 0.123989218329 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0377358490566 0.0249443105267 151% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0242587601078 0.0148568991511 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1861.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 337.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52225519288 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317507418398 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204747774481 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0919881305638 0.200843997647 46% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.053412462908 0.132149295362 40% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.4105660454 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 219.290929204 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391691394659 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.9776796117 55.4138127331 70% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.125 23.380412469 180% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 98.83034706 59.4972553346 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 232.625 141.124799967 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.125 23.380412469 180% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 62.5997774481 51.4728631049 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.23214285714 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19782629335 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.392927719373 0.123202303941 319% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108148228263 0.077325440228 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.852943240401 0.547984918172 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128448904535 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13970141882 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035501167074 0.0892212321368 40% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.518676105421 0.385218514788 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0694197158426 0.0692045440612 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152729459366 0.275328986314 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427068185336 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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