Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
The author claimed that citizens are obliged to comply with just laws and to defy dishonest ones. Although
one could argue that for the orderly functioning of a society people should submit to lagislations that apply
universally, deficiencies in human constructs entail flawed clauses that ought to be challenged and
revamped.
Admittedly, laws are by definition customs or procedures that are binding for a society. They are designed
in such a way as to protect the interests of every single member equally and punish any wrongdoing which
may led to disadvantage or affliction. Any breach of laws would likey to bring about social unrest and
inequality and endanger the established social order. Therefore, it seems justifiable to comply to all
legislations regardless of subjective notion of just defined by individuals. Nevertheless, it only applies under
a well-developed society in which leagal system is faultless and residents are ideally equal.
Neither reckless disobeyance nor blind acceptance would be benignant for an advancing society. Einstein
once said "Never do anything against conscience even if the state demands it". When evaluation the
efficaciousness of a piece of law we should be guided through our morality and consider whether the
minority has been protected. For example, the discriminating nature of the laws on Jewish population
passed by nazi germany appears evident. Had all germans comply with the rules naively considering the
government as always justified, a even greater Holocaust would be recorded. What they should do instead
is to realize the true core of Fascism autonomy and discrimination towards the Jewish population, listen to
their own sence of integrity and stand up against the repressing regime. As a Jewish at the time, there
were plenty of rationales not to be subservient since he/she would have perished in any instance as long as
the unjust laws were extant. What histrory has shown us is the overthrown of nazi regime by the people
and under no conditions should such inhumane legislations be obeyed.
Take the slavery laws in colonial america for example, numerous people lost their freedom and become
properties of the wealthy planters. These egregious laws resulted in immense suffering of many and
legalized countless atrocities. However allegiant one could be he/she ought be obliged to correct these
discriminating laws and save hundreds of thousands of ordinary people who were born in a different colour.
Without the integrity of the people our societies would fall in the hands of ruthless tyrant and in chaos.
Responsible representatives like Martin Luther King later ensured the rights that the black are entitled to
and helped the society to progress. Thus people shoud be able to challenge unjust laws and promote the
universal values that could make the world a better place.
In conclusion, laws ensure order and guide the proper behaviour of the society. It is compulsory to obey
the law, however owning to divergent economic, political and cultural conditons laws could not be perfect
and as a resposible citizen one should be able to resist such laws and ameliorate our legal system.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.18315018315 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100732600733 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043956043956 0.0497285424764 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0238095238095 0.0444667217837 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113553113553 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0457875457875 0.0406280797675 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91529672665 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347985347985 0.030933414821 112% => OK
Particles: 0.003663003663 0.0016655270985 220% => OK
Determiners: 0.0934065934066 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0311355311355 0.0249443105267 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018315018315 0.0148568991511 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3300.0 2732.02544248 121% => OK
No of words: 505.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53465346535 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425742574257 0.366273622748 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310891089109 0.280924506359 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215841584158 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158415841584 0.132149295362 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91529672665 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 219.290929204 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578217821782 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 73.7965358192 55.4138127331 133% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9565217391 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8488324193 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.47826087 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9565217391 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.94800884956 627% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 46.0 5.21349557522 882% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.04563065 51.4728631049 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.55474452555 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342512673444 0.391690518653 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0785165684321 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0408412373206 0.077325440228 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.737457370567 0.547984918172 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.252575195591 0.149214159877 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133972612053 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082799904922 0.0892212321368 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0867910983365 0.385218514788 23% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0718763411293 0.0692045440612 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119650786137 0.275328986314 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929069935987 0.0653680567796 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.