If a society is to thrive, it must put its own overall success before the well-being of itsindividual citizens
Some argue that in order for a society to immensely grow, it vital that it put the success as a goal that can be reached without considering the well-being of tool, human, of it. I cannot agree with this statement as the well-being of human play as crucial part in the development of a society as the success of the society.
For a society to grow up massively and noticeably, various ways can be utilised for such success without taking into account the comfort of their mankind. Such ways in which the society can gain a huge amount of financial profits that will bring a huge benefits to the development of the society. Considering the war as example, a country may contribute in a war that will bring them a resources lacked in the country. Any war is known for its detemenational effects on human beings, as it will reduce their population, or bring sadness and discomfort. Other measures that a country may use to develop by having an intense jobs created by investing in trades, building infrastructure as an examples. Such jobs will take the comfort of people, bring them health problems seen as stress and strains but will return with a huge revenue and advancement to a country.
On the other hand, it cannot be ignored that the human-well beings is vital in the growing success of a society. The human represent a tool with which a society will develop. It is the tool to carry out a job and bring revenue, it is the tool to come up with innovative ideas that advances the society. It is the tool to use knowledge and experience to solve complex issues faced by a society in a political aspect as an example that otherwise the community will cease success. Therefore, caring about the well- being of human is vital in the success.
Although community thrive will bring benefit that may be utilised in increasing human success, that is reaching the goal of success will bring up an advancement in the well-being of a community, it cannot be started on the expense of human welling. However, it may be justified that reaching a goal and success require a huge effort that need to be given from the human well being and they later will recomposed for it from the resulting benefits. It also that without giving effort the community will stay in position. However, these all cannot be justified over utilising the well-being of human in a way that is detementional to them such as war.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...inancial profits that will bring a huge benefits to the development of the society. Cons...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resource' or simply 'resources'?
Suggestion: a resource; resources
...ontribute in a war that will bring them a resources lacked in the country. Any war is known...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...fort. Other measures that a country may use to develop by having an intense jobs cr...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...may use to develop by having an intense jobs created by investing in trades, buildin...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an example' or simply 'examples'?
Suggestion: an example; examples
...g in trades, building infrastructure as an examples. Such jobs will take the comfort of peo...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'recompose'
Suggestion: recompose
...he human well being and they later will recomposed for it from the resulting benefits. It ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218614718615 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.168831168831 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0649350649351 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281385281385 0.0497285424764 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04329004329 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147186147186 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0670995670996 0.0406280797675 165% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.675274458 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00865800865801 0.0016655270985 520% => OK
Determiners: 0.134199134199 0.0997080785238 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.047619047619 0.0249443105267 191% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.021645021645 0.0148568991511 146% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2403.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 425.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65411764706 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312941176471 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263529411765 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164705882353 0.200843997647 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103529411765 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.675274458 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.423529411765 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.5925765919 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6610045404 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.352941176 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 51.3529411765 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.8018018018 1.64882698954 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330709473341 0.391690518653 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168394616101 0.123202303941 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0918496374677 0.077325440228 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594578010897 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146711458201 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161029482606 0.161403998019 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837490736434 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.478860628842 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542324450398 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267161427856 0.275328986314 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678040020694 0.0653680567796 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.