The graph below gives information on wages of some country over a ten year period.

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The graph below gives information on wages of some country over a ten year period.

Submitted by mimilili on Thu, 08/18/2016 - 07:29

Rendered on a line chart is information regarding the annual growth percentage in some country's salary from 1993 to 2003. A pattern plainly in evidence is that the growth rate of wages experienced an upward trend in the first five-year phase, and then declined sharply in the following years.

The country demonstrated a moderate rate of increase in the proportions of income, doubling from 2% to 4% in 1994. After that, the figure fell back to 3 percentage points, followed by a gradual recovery to nearly 4% until 1997. One of the most remarkable point is that the wage percentage reached a peak of 6 percent in 1998.

A contrasting pattern took shape in the 1999-2003 span due to the fact that the rate witnessed a considerably more rapid downturn compared with the prior trend. Some country's income rate plummeted and then levelled off at 3% between 1998 and 2000. After that, a slight reduction took place, followed by a significant dip to a tiny of 1%, but then recovered to 2% at the end of the period.

Overall, it is abundantly clear that the wage percentage grew dramatically from 1993 to 1998. while it notably underwent a downturn trend in the last five years.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ge grew dramatically from 1993 to 1998. while it notably underwent a downturn trend i...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge grew dramatically from 1993 to 1998. while it notably underwent a downturn trend i...
^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241228070175 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.105263157895 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0789473684211 0.0759168565197 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0570175438596 0.0366838410393 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00877192982456 0.0131127313244 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149122807018 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0263157894737 0.0379272487307 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73588530674 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350877192982 0.0210936926555 166% => OK
Particles: 0.00438596491228 0.00175180941692 250% => OK
Determiners: 0.144736842105 0.0948980150116 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1178.0 1161.00487805 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.9 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74634146341 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321951219512 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253658536585 0.247514529752 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190243902439 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112195121951 0.112407865282 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73588530674 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 56.3627723192 49.3433353143 114% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7777777778 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3588120735 42.9750493124 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.888888889 135.714022679 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 48.1436314363 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.4358974359 2.94281807926 83% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216080122588 0.418131533498 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106510954279 0.181151798455 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0596207812317 0.0850326197045 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.664024469176 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170738760929 0.157042692854 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106143798186 0.228904883108 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499496322711 0.108899403657 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350035425008 0.367819155151 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.08695750533 0.0812612215331 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139734207909 0.316326947829 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528676258998 0.0921553760075 57% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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