The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph reveals the emissiom of carbon dioxide in four different countries,including the United Kingdom,Sweden,Italy and Portagul,during a 40-year period from 1967 to 2007.
It is clear that the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom and Sweden tended to fall.On the contrary,that in two countries remaining seemed to be growth.
In 1967,the United Kingdom stood at approximately 11 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide emissions and became the highest one among four countries.Then,it decreased rapidly by 2 metric tonnes for 40 years.Similarly,the emission of carbon dioxide in Sweden reached a peak at over 10 metric tonnes in 1997 before going down over period a 30-year.
By contrast,there was a significant increase in carbon dioxide emissions in Italy and Portugal.The average carbon dioxide emissions in Italy overtook that in Sweden and became the highest metric tonnes with nearly 8 in 2007.In Portugal,the level of carbon dioxide emissions raised considerably from almost 2 metric tonnes to about 5 metric tonnes between 1967 and 2007.Suprisingly,there was an equal numbers of metric tonnes in Sweden and Portugal in 2007.
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- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 52
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.294117647059 0.268076937826 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.0882352941176 0.116061578633 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0882352941176 0.0759168565197 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0294117647059 0.0366838410393 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00980392156863 0.0131127313244 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.18137254902 0.155750635184 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0147058823529 0.0379272487307 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.63849389147 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0210936926555 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00490196078431 0.00175180941692 280% => OK
Determiners: 0.078431372549 0.0948980150116 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1164.0 1161.00487805 100% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.5393258427 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.505617977528 0.337110787985 150% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286516853933 0.247514529752 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162921348315 0.171178102325 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123595505618 0.112407865282 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63849389147 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 44.5945299356 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.5 23.0094962315 193% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 119.091089087 42.9750493124 277% => OK
Chars per sentence: 291.0 135.714022679 214% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 23.0094962315 193% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.689975730869 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.48048780488 1013% => OK
Readability: 73.1516853933 47.7609492067 153% => OK
Elegance: 3.84615384615 2.94281807926 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472723896588 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.321011946769 0.181151798455 177% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0988537517652 0.0850326197045 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.35973995551e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.350207579838 0.228904883108 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597924153489 0.108899403657 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365647062774 0.367819155151 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0866042365857 0.0812612215331 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350207579838 0.316326947829 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597924153489 0.0921553760075 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.