Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
Law and order of any country are essentials to be strict to maintain peace and harmony in the society. However, the execution of capital punishment is hotly debated topic that often divides the opinions. Some people says capital punishment is essential to control violence in the society whereas some refute the thought. However, I strongly believe to have capital sentence for the serious offences that can devastate the society adversely. My inclination supports the utterance with the following arguments.
To commence with, there are many crimes that requires strict stances so that it would not be repeated by others.
Capital sentence can create fear in the mind of offenders and general public before attempting any crime associate with the sentence. In absence of capital sentence for serious crime, the criminal will become fearless and will feel free to create any kind of anarchy in the society. To exemplify, In India there is no strict law for the criminals who attempt rape due to what the rate of rape has been increased in many metro cities abruptly. This situation created a situation of insecurity among the women in a manner that women don't feel safe in those cities during day time even.
Furthermore, There are many countries who have very strict laws for the serious crime. It helps to reduce the rate of crime in those countries. For instance , In many gulf countries there are very strict laws to cut the hand or to damage eyes of the person for the women exploitation. This rules keeps the fear in mind of criminal whenever he try to attempt such cruel offence.
On the flip side, Punishments should be declared in the light of facts and proofs. It happens many a time that an innocent people become victim of this punishment in absence of justice. sometimes person doesn't want to attempt any crime but circumstances force the person to attempt any crime. In those cases, government should provide some provision to support crimes those are executed for self-defence or for the benefit of the society.
To recapitulate, I can say that capital sentence should be the part of the law of every country to keep the pressure in the criminal mind and strengthen the feeling of safety and security in the society.
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Essay evaluation report
is hotly debated topic
is a hotly debated topic
Some people says capital punishment is essential
Some people say that capital punishment is essential
many crimes that requires strict stances
many crimes that require strict stances
This rules keeps the fear
This rule keeps the fear
provide some provision to support crimes those are executed for self-defence
provide some provisions to support crimes which are executed for self-defence
Sentence: This rules keeps the fear in mind of criminal whenever he try to attempt such cruel offence.
Description: The fragment he try to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace try with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1818 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.772 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.479 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.618 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: public
...reate fear in the mind of offenders and general public before attempting any crime associate w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... among the women in a manner that women dont feel safe in those cities during day ti...
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Suggestion: ,
...f crime in those countries. For instance , In many gulf countries there are very s...
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Line 6, column 297, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
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Suggestion: keep
... for the women exploitation. This rules keeps the fear in mind of criminal whenever h...
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Suggestion: Sometimes
... this punishment in absence of justice. sometimes person doesnt want to attempt any crime...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...in absence of justice. sometimes person doesnt want to attempt any crime but circumsta...
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Suggestion:
...ep the pressure in the criminal mind and strengthen the feeling of safety and s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281862745098 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.142156862745 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0735294117647 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0343137254902 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0171568627451 0.0437548338989 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134803921569 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0171568627451 0.0403226058552 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.55858096708 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0326793684256 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132352941176 0.0861772015684 154% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220588235294 0.021408717616 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.011925033212 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2247.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91315789474 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368421052632 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276315789474 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181578947368 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0973684210526 0.137316102897 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55858096708 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492105263158 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.6780542877 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7840986372 49.517814964 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.263157895 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.6315789474 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.24050632911 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428012564715 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0948328089797 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751929385964 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606130765781 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163491455105 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178285793237 0.134430193775 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807219446012 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312778957548 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.182479677114 0.0638462369009 286% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268938004477 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106836585148 0.058150111329 184% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.5751503006 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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