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Both the reading and the lecture try to discuss an ancient European silver coin that was discovered at a Native American site in the state of Maine. While the author states that the coin is not a genuine historical evidence, but a fake one, and brings some ideas to support this claim, the speaker finds all these ideas dubious and brings some evidence to refute them all.
First, the reading argues that this coin was found far away from the Norse settlements. This fact firmly supports the claim that this coin does not belong to the Europeans who came to the North America. On the other hand, the lecturer plays up the idea that these are some other ancient objects that were found in distant places .In addition, the Norse settlements were interested in discovering far places, and finding new objects.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that there were no other coins found in that area owing to the fact that; actually, these Europeans did not bring any coin to the United States with themselves, accordingly, these coins cannot support any historical issue. In contrast, the professor brings the idea that The Norse did not create any permanent settlements for themselves. They took coins to the United States , and packed them up when they went back to Europe, therefore it is obvious why scientists could not find any other coins in that region.
Last but not least, the reading passage states that the Native Americans did not recognize these coins as valuable objects or money, thus the Norse did not bring them with themselves, since they were useless. Conversely, the speaker dismisses all these ideas due to the fact that these coins were not used as money. The Americans loved them for their beauty. They made jewelry and neckless with them. This assertion proves the usefulness of these coins and their genuine presence in the Maine state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...bjects that were found in distant places .In addition, the Norse settlements were ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ects that were found in distant places .In addition, the Norse settlements were in...
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Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es. They took coins to the United States , and packed them up when they went back ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'furthermore', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241477272727 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.142045454545 0.158904122519 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681818181818 0.0723426182421 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596590909091 0.0435111971325 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0426136363636 0.0277247811725 154% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0880681818182 0.128828473217 68% => OK
Participles: 0.0227272727273 0.0370669169778 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30368039436 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284090909091 0.0208969081088 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00568181818182 0.00154638098197 367% => OK
Determiners: 0.170454545455 0.128158765124 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00568181818182 0.0158828679856 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142045454545 0.0114777025283 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1873.0 1645.83664459 114% => OK
No of words: 320.0 271.125827815 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.853125 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04852973271 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30625 0.374372842146 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2125 0.287516216867 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128125 0.187439937562 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.09375 0.113142543107 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30368039436 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50625 0.539623497131 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7101174012 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6153846154 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0554302935 49.3711431718 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.076923077 132.220823453 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 21.7502111507 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.878197800319 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 45.8653846154 50.5018328374 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.44186046512 1.90840788429 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144215452161 0.142949733639 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0805755218216 0.0787303798458 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.624443877487 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162090942014 0.139662658121 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.483989113812 0.414875509568 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0343244948262 0.0530846634433 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.2958057395 97% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.