In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live such as Mars.To what extend do you agree with this statement.
It is argued that disburse money for researches such as to live other than earth namely Mars, because life on the earth is seems to be arduous. while I believe that live on the earth is being hard, this essay disagree that government should spent money for the discovery of other planets to live rather than the benefit of earth. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that the exact reason for, why earth needs money, and secondly submit the drawback of expend on other planets.
To begin with, condition of nature is going vigorously every other day.People are often destroy earth by excessive use of plastic materials,fossil fuels,deforestation and so on. Government should make legislation and spend money for recycling of waste materials, studies for more bio gas plants and cultivation of trees. Doing by this, earth behaves would be change, and no need to think about life on other planet. For instance, recent survey said that plantation of new tress in north India reduce the chance of getting drought. Government of India distribute money for "one tree one man scheme".
On the other hand, discovery of other planet may be helpful for science and technology. Despite this, life on other planet would definitely make health problems as well as that would be an expensive than on earth. The amount of money spent for such things are converted to the well being of nature would helpful for the earth in some how.For example,since over a three decades scientists are use money for Mars to identify the water content over there. Unfortunately, still they are not sure about that. In contrast, if they contribute that money for the evolution of earth, which would be a sustainable development.
In conclusion, researches are beneficial for either of earth or other planet in different ways. Nevertheless, expenditure of money in a proper manner for the peoples daily living is more challenging. Government should be wary about this and disburse money for better earth than other planet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to begin with', 'as well as that', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283068783069 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.124338624339 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0899470899471 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042328042328 0.0501214627716 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010582010582 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.179894179894 0.122226691241 147% => OK
Participles: 0.026455026455 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75254344459 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185185185185 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0820105820106 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026455026455 0.021408717616 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00793650793651 0.011925033212 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2011.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03903903904 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318318318318 0.374742101984 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219219219219 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156156156156 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123123123123 0.137316102897 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75254344459 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.7126373146 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8125 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8269503131 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6875 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 0.814263465372 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.99599198397 250% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.7344219219 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.76119402985 1.69124875643 163% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358184225797 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119115454044 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0978032075897 0.0668466124924 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539376968288 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14894477728 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143707808521 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991972639418 0.0742795772207 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381716083006 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0247966037145 0.0638462369009 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249766780747 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993377445667 0.058150111329 171% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.