Nowadays most people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
Globalization and modernization have supported the western culture in influencing the clothing of the rest part of the world. People , specifically youth has been influenced by the fashion and clothing of the western country. There are many reasons behind this advancement which I would like to elaborate as follows.
To start with, globalization has supported cultural exchange among the countries and clothing is one of the exclusive aspects of any culture. Western clothing gives a deep assortment of choices for different event and occasion. For instance, they have different clothing style for...
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Essay evaluation report
People , specifically youth has been influenced
People , specifically youths have been influenced
globalization has supported cultural exchange among the countries and clothing is one of the exclusive aspects of any culture.
globalization has supported cultural exchange among the countries, and clothing is one of the exclusive aspects of any culture.
for different event and occasion.
for different events and occasions.
they have different clothing style
they have different clothing styles
the person wearing traditional clothes except traditional events are considered as old fashioned
the person ... is considered as old fashioned
the persons ... are considered as old fashioned
today's youth believe more
today's youths believe more
which requires a wise combination of fashion and comfort and blind copy of anything can lead to the reason
which requires a wise combination of fashion and comfort, and blind copy of anything can lead to the reason
Sentence: On the flipside, in copying the western culture blindly, people are on the verge of losing their traditions and cultural values.For example, the sari is the traditional clothing of Indian woman, however, the current trend has restricted this clothing to the traditional occasion only. secondly, the blind copy of western culture leads to damage the thought process of people.
Error: flipside Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Clothing is an indispensible part of our life which requires a wise combination of fashion and comfort and blind copy of anything can lead to the reason of embracement.
Error: indispensible Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: embracement Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Try not to use passive voice a lot. for example:
People , specifically youth has been influenced by the fashion and clothing of the western country.
better:
the fashion and clothing of the western country have greatly influenced people, specifically youths.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 394 350
No. of Characters: 2038 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.455 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.173 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.829 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.298 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng of the rest part of the world. People , specifically youth has been influenced ...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... has affected all the parts of the world , donning western clothes gives an impre...
^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted all the parts of the world , donning western clothes gives an impression of a...
^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pression of a modern person. Many a time ,the person wearing traditional clothes e...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Last
...as old fashioned or conservative person.Last but not the least, It has been observed...
^^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ot the least, It has been observed that todays youth believe more in the outer appeara...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ng their traditions and cultural values.For example, the sari is the traditional cl...
^^^
Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...thing to the traditional occasion only. secondly, the blind copy of western culture lead...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in my view', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250580046404 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.155452436195 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111368909513 0.0946595960268 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510440835267 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208816705336 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122969837587 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0580046403712 0.0403226058552 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92477425008 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0255220417633 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113689095128 0.0861772015684 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00696055684455 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0092807424594 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2496.0 1933.35771543 129% => OK
No of words: 394.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33502538071 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.416243654822 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.352791878173 0.28420135186 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243654822335 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142131979695 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92477425008 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.037074148 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 61.4558710252 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7368421053 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4036309899 49.517814964 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.368421053 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7368421053 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.0160299225 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.89795918367 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23632982165 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103258517806 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0827399755782 0.0668466124924 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562282560051 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158866036321 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932549121045 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473133693863 0.0742795772207 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433060983271 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593011270998 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157506001896 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521262096552 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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