Some people think that because of email and telephones, communication among people is less personal now, then it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your view.
Thanks to technology, world has become very small place. The modern technology helps a lot in people's life. People can communicate very easily. I will discuss my point in coming paragraph how technology give its positive influences and has some negative influences too.
Someone has rightly said, ""It is true that the communication techniques have lessened the distance among people but it is really true that first we create distance then we use them. "Presently, people are move different parts of the world. New communication techniques helps us to stay in touch with the people who are far from us. Any important message, nowadays can reach any corner of the world within a matter of seconds, this has really proved a matter of seconds, this has really proved to be a boon for us. We are now able to shared in more with the world than what shared in past. The really good example, Facebook, twitter, Gmail, yahoo and so on these sites helps us to connected with people. People can share their pictures, videos with their friends. This all makes us more mechanical than human. For more example, gone are those days when used to wait for long year to watch her husband's face who worked out of his country. Now, she can easily talk with him by using video calls and see his face everyday at anytime. These sites definitely helped such people but on other hand, it has some negative influences also.
On the other hand, the communication has lost its personal touch. The human expressions can never be fully conveyed by such techniques. We often have many close relatives living in other parts of the world. The number of long distance relationship has also increased, due to available to technology. but the communication has started losing its personal charm. For example, people used to write letters to one another in their own hand writing and send by post when the person read this letter and they get emotional. Nowadays nobody to personally write letters anymore so I believe the older communication methods a lot of charm and emotional.
To conclude, I would say, although the technology has surely proved to boon for our society yet but I believe it has lost the personal touch, surely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...in more with the world than what shared in past. The really good example, Facebook, twi...
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Line 3, column 1026, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...m by using video calls and see his face everyday at anytime. These sites definitely help...
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Line 3, column 1140, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...r hand, it has some negative influences also. On the other hand, the communicatio...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...reased, due to available to technology. but the communication has started losing it...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'charm'.
Suggestion: charm
...he communication has started losing its personal charm. For example, people used to write lett...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22969837587 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.162412993039 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835266821346 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0672853828306 0.0501214627716 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0742459396752 0.0437548338989 170% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0951276102088 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0394431554524 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6167678366 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324825986079 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0835266821346 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162412993039 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139211136891 0.011925033212 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2218.0 1933.35771543 115% => OK
No of words: 379.0 316.048096192 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85224274406 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324538258575 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208443271768 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163588390501 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0949868073879 0.137316102897 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6167678366 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551451187335 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 62.1523878299 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4782608696 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0327610725 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4347826087 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.814263465372 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 37.3225880463 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.19847328244 1.69124875643 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236108007526 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0707019418441 0.102741220458 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069122663945 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.412304450615 0.534860350844 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166123110358 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746732884268 0.134430193775 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440666358782 0.0742795772207 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298731762712 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0904953999458 0.0638462369009 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13964253462 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066736697032 0.058150111329 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.68436873747 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 5.90881763527 254% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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