On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you in regard of loss of my favorite necklace.
I was on long vacation for (10 days) in one of 5 stars hotel. Each evening hotel authorities hold some interesting parties, quizzes and entertain the people. On the last day they hold a wonderful party with live music. That evening I wore my valuable necklace. After the party I remember that I took off the necklace and as I prepared to come back, I put it to my pocket for valuable things. When I returned home and open my pocket, the necklace wasn’t there. I was upset with this loss, as it had a sensible value for me.
As I was insured by your company I would like to ask you to cover the cost of the lost. My insurance number is AX2255. The necklace was gold with some diamonds. I can send you all related details and also the passport of the product if it is needed.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Rahimova Mehriban
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as it had a sensible value for me. As I was insured by your company I would l...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Rahimova Mehriban
^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Rahimova Mehriban
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224390243902 0.220444632235 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.156097560976 0.167888034529 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0487804878049 0.0606518309736 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0243902439024 0.0506257000042 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.141463414634 0.118615021944 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.107062808482 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0439024390244 0.041066498444 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45144540364 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.0385302599488 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00487804878049 0.00132118243153 369% => OK
Determiners: 0.0829268292683 0.0714148451538 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00975609756098 0.0191574576366 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00487804878049 0.00930345855455 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 975.0 1141.60824742 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.134020619 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38674033149 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.270718232044 0.284621296913 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232044198895 0.211203875043 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14364640884 0.133321485273 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0552486187845 0.0843313296314 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45144540364 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.3053189911 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0666666667 16.4300151701 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3122274331 44.7399317507 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 90.9928171075 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 16.4300151701 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.266666666667 0.613754768223 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 35.2710865562 37.5504026743 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.21212121212 1.13073093955 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328784227613 0.331212695627 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0785382571718 0.0927372745006 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0793457582632 0.0736520305886 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542548966722 0.579516596996 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.27004392249 0.180689518051 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103040331181 0.122183219658 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937649510067 0.0765303033291 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.163614420995 0.211926503985 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0880639925202 0.0737400523855 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190923036667 0.203819188451 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977465494337 0.067151250289 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.