The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
In this era of 21st century, everything has changed and technology is increasing day by day. Internet is a boon to human life which is gifted by technology. It is used in every part of the life but it creates some problems and there are some solutions too. I will discuss both these views in the following paragraphs.
The unlimited use of internet cause some problems. The first is that by using internet anyone can hack the personal data of other person and use it in wrong way. For example, the cases of robbery are seen each and every day which is related to use of data from internet somewhere. Secondly, young generation concentrates more on entertainment sources and become weak in studies and in social life.
There are some remedies also which helps to remove these problems. There should be a age for using adult sites so that children cannot use these types of sites. Furthermore, excess of everything is bad that’s why use the internet in limit and in a good way.
In conclusion, everything has good and bad points but it’s upto on person they use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24537037037 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.162037037037 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0740740740741 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324074074074 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037037037037 0.0437548338989 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134259259259 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60762253612 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0138888888889 0.0326793684256 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101851851852 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.011925033212 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1082.0 1933.35771543 56% => OK
No of words: 190.0 316.048096192 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69473684211 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20517956788 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268421052632 0.374742101984 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205263157895 0.28420135186 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168421052632 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110526315789 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60762253612 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.037074148 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584210526316 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 53.8024121713 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0962226536 49.517814964 45% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1666666667 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 36.3596491228 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.8 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280172628535 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126145152376 0.102741220458 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0924846812629 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552626315609 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171975709229 0.148594505496 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133942365169 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111413335141 0.0742795772207 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30584617026 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107340770469 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180561766142 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939318907604 0.058150111329 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.