TPO31-1
In the reading passage, it talks about the evidences from dinosaur’s fossil which show this kind of dinosaurs have not feather, however, the professor holds different idea and explains and refutes readings reasons.
To begin with, in the reading material we learn that fiber skin of dinosaurs made from their buried in the volcanic ash and decomposed in the fiber, so, it cannot show exist of feathers on their bodies. The professor thinks that before than this, no researches about other animals, which lived at the same time with dinosaurs, have showed fiber on the animal’s skin are from volcano ash.
In addition, in the reading passage, it says that dinosaur's skeleton demonstrate the frills on their body instead of feathers. While, the professor indicates that there are many chemically different between frill and feather. Research on their content will show there are feathers because of one chemical material, which is in the frills but is absence in the feathers.
As final point, according to the passage feathers could not be useful for the dinosaurs because feathers are for preventing the skin to lose lower heat or are for flying and dinosaurs did not need to them, but the professor mentions that feather function is not only for these two purposes and like some birds can have various usage.
In conclusion, the professor does not agree with the article reasons and he believes dinosaurs have feather.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'feathered'.
Suggestion: feathered
...ch show this kind of dinosaurs have not feather, however, the professor holds different...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dinosaurs'' or 'dinosaur's'?
Suggestion: dinosaurs'; dinosaur's
...n, in the reading passage, it says that dinosaurs skeleton demonstrate the frills on thei...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'feathered'.
Suggestion: feathered
... reasons and he believes dinosaurs have feather.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256505576208 0.261695866417 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.156133828996 0.158904122519 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0446096654275 0.0723426182421 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0483271375465 0.0435111971325 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0371747211896 0.0277247811725 134% => OK
Prepositions: 0.159851301115 0.128828473217 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0297397769517 0.0370669169778 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53749532118 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148698884758 0.0208969081088 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.092936802974 0.128158765124 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148698884758 0.0158828679856 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111524163569 0.0114777025283 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1439.0 1645.83664459 87% => OK
No of words: 236.0 271.125827815 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09745762712 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351694915254 0.374372842146 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292372881356 0.287516216867 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220338983051 0.187439937562 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122881355932 0.113142543107 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53749532118 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.539623497131 106% => OK
Word variations: 56.1350715522 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 29.5 21.7502111507 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8974964794 49.3711431718 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.875 132.220823453 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 21.7502111507 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.878197800319 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 58.7372881356 50.5018328374 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.84615384615 1.90840788429 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.586427935453 0.549887131256 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161621851951 0.142949733639 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641277589494 0.0787303798458 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.799058647081 0.631733273073 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1883895014 0.139662658121 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.335591197205 0.266732575781 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778205554098 0.103435571967 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330359824308 0.414875509568 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0760040473444 0.0530846634433 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387659330313 0.40443939384 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785048908339 0.0528353158467 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.1766004415 157% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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