Some young adults want to live with th
The speaker asserts that some young adults want independence from their parents whereas others prefer to live with their families for a longer time.According to me, the first situation is better as it provides young adults an opportunity to make independent decisions. However, I feel that if young people lack confidence and self-dependency skills, it is better to live with their families for longer time.
Firstly, I feel moving away from parents make people better individuals.Right from when they are born, parents take care of their children in every possible way to prevent any danger happening to them.Since parents look after each and every aspects of their children, it becomes difficult for children to grown into self-dependent individuals.For example, I read an article in The Times of India which stated that young adults in western countries try to move away from parents at an early age to ensure that they become self-reliant and can take more responsibility. It is believed that
parents in those countries encourage their children in this regard,unlike some countries where it is considered to be a taboo.
Secondly,it helps young people to become more matured and in a way responsible so that they can take independent decisions.Some people always ask their parents to take certain decisions pertaining to their lives. When children move away from their houses, they develop skills required to make important decisions and have a better chance of expressing themselves.Since parents cannot live with their children forever, it is important for youngsters to become independent right from early age.For instance, I had a friend in college , who lived away from his parents then.My friends and I were of a notion that since he is living away from his parents, he may not be as matured as we are. But to our disbelief, he was able to take better decisions when stakes were high thereby indicating high degree of independence and self-dependency.
Thirdly, some younger generations move away out from houses as they are tired of restrictions put forth by their parents. Some strict parents tend to look into make stringent rules which their children believe difficult to agree upon. They want independence from their parents as soon as possible.For instance, I saw a news saying that a student studying in tenth grade escaped from his house unable to withstand his torturous parents. He further stated that his parents asked pressurized him to study everyday even though he was interested in sports. He wanted
to seek independence from his parents and therefore fled away.
However, I definitely believe that if youngsters incapable of making important decisions or those who are equivocal in their approaches, then it is better off to stay with their parents for a longer time. Since parents have tremendous experience in journey of life, they can assist them before making any important decisions.
To sum up, I believe that if younger generation has belief that they can live independently,they can move away from their parents.
But, if they have doubts,it is better to stay with parents for longer time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.200723327306 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.186256781193 0.158761421928 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886075949367 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0614828209765 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108499095841 0.0685040099705 158% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.137432188065 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0325497287523 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96474134704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0452079566004 0.0309702414327 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00180831826401 0.00188951952338 96% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488245931284 0.0887237588012 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126582278481 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162748643761 0.0139019557991 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3139.0 2387.08602151 131% => OK
No of words: 509.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16699410609 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369351669941 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271119842829 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182711198428 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135559921415 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96474134704 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463654223969 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.5926443393 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 31.8125 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 133.979578085 48.84282405 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.1875 120.699889404 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8125 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 0.644075263715 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.5376344086 198% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.9244842829 45.7405998639 129% => OK
Elegance: 1.04060913706 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218907521226 0.300154397459 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132523478807 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740023625321 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.67528771889 0.497263757937 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.267707342398 0.151897553556 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101194527545 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857107794514 0.0781384742642 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234932241991 0.336927656856 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101795331744 0.067059652881 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121587794991 0.210909579961 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091325396385 0.0618886996521 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.