Although innovations such as video,computers,and the internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students,these technologies all too often distract from real learning.
Technological innovations such as computers and other things offer a useful and beneficial help to schools for instructing students in many ways.Schools can offer course related material to the students who want the soft copies of material and thus the students can gain a lot from these materials instead of searching for hard copies of materials.
Schools can offer powerpoint presentations to students which in turn helps the students in learning the materials effectively.Students can thereby learn the materials with the help of visual data and in much more simpler way rather than cramming up the textbooks.Thus, powerpoint presentations can help the students in many many useful ways.There are many powerpoint presentations available on internet of various universities like stanford ,harvard etc.
Other means like videos related to course related materials can help the students in gaining the pragmatic knowledge regarding the course being studied by them.These videos can reduce byzantine problems to much more simpler ones and thus helps the students in gaining the practical knowledge regarding the problems which they are facing and thereby can overcome those problems very effectively and efficiently.There are also video lectures available of best universities in the world like University of California Berkeley.There are also video lectures available for computer science people like the video lectures from newboston etc.
The internet can help the students in searching any information they want thanks to Google (the most powerful search engine).Google helps a lot in gaining any information related to any field of studies.The internet also can help instructors also as they can explain the material more efficiently due to internet accessibility.The instructors thereby can offer this information to the students of their class and thus pass on the information which they had just gained fom the internet.Due to internet,the instructor's job becomes easy as their workload can be reduced significantly and thus they will find the intricated work much more simple.There are also lots of courses available on coursera ,edx etc which can be accessed via internet and they can help significantly in improving one's knowledge.
But sometimes these technologies distract from real learning in a way that when students really want to learn something they may not be able to do so as these technologies might offer only cursory knowledge regarding the course contents and thereby precluding the students from real learning.
Thus, the innovations like computers and internet can help in achieving knowledge regarding various fields.These technologies should be used efficiently and in a proper way to enhance one's learning in a particular area of learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'thus', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266055045872 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.158256880734 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105504587156 0.0880659088768 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0825688073394 0.0497285424764 166% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0206422018349 0.0444667217837 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114678899083 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0596330275229 0.0406280797675 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.19118938685 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298165137615 0.030933414821 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0045871559633 0.0016655270985 275% => OK
Determiners: 0.098623853211 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.045871559633 0.0249443105267 184% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0137614678899 0.0148568991511 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2773.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54009433962 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39858490566 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.344339622642 0.280924506359 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.283018867925 0.200843997647 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186320754717 0.132149295362 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19118938685 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429245283019 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.2344496145 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 70.6666666667 23.380412469 302% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 198.873284614 59.4972553346 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 462.166666667 141.124799967 327% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6666666667 23.380412469 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.674092028746 247% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 105.100628931 51.4728631049 204% => OK
Elegance: 1.68421052632 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317220348864 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.297865814206 0.123202303941 242% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0697524597067 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.05396129633e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2229595161 0.161403998019 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749917873811 0.0892212321368 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360059008023 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0987349218896 0.0692045440612 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2229595161 0.275328986314 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749917873811 0.0653680567796 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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