It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
Everyone has their own opinion about friendship. In my opinion, we must keep our old friends and at the same time, make new friends. I feel this way for two important reasons which I will discuss in the following essay.
First of all, every friend is important. In our life, we come across various difficult situations and we often take help from people we know to cope with them. So, we never know who would help us when we need it the most. As the saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. So, it is always good to have a big circle of friends. Moreover, there is no harm in making new friends. It is always fun to spend time with our friends and they are always there to support us no matter what. I believe that it is a boon to have many good friends.
Secondly, when I meet new people, I enjoy talking to them and knowing more about them. That is how friendship gradually develops between us. When we are extremely comfortable with each other, we become old friends. So, the first step to have a good friend is to try making new friends. We will not have any friends if we do not meet new people. In other words, I have my old friends now only because I decided to talk to them years ago. Moreover, meeting new people and interacting with them puts me out of my comfort zone. Hence, I feel that it is necessary to make new friends.
In summary, although old friends know us better, and will always be there for us, there is nothing wrong in making new friends. In fact, new friends can also be as close as our old friends. Hence, we must always be open to making new friends, while keeping our old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Everyone has their own opinion about friendship. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'i feel', 'in fact', 'in summary', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.150568181818 0.229887763892 65% => OK
Verbs: 0.167613636364 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110795454545 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0795454545455 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127840909091 0.0685040099705 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.09375 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0284090909091 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.21733629881 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340909090909 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0482954545455 0.0887237588012 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198863636364 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0198863636364 0.0139019557991 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1629.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 309.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27184466019 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26213592233 0.338922669872 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181229773463 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.100323624595 0.174417080927 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0485436893204 0.112833075102 43% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.21733629881 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.4576065497 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0454545455 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7509422201 48.84282405 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0454545455 120.699889404 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0454545455 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 32.1684318917 45.7405998639 70% => OK
Elegance: 0.727272727273 1.45489161554 50% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462112070876 0.300154397459 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0991367554605 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0823021699126 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.452747406603 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136199777191 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165329233141 0.114077575197 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119427731211 0.0781384742642 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323362967394 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123141779131 0.067059652881 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303566828063 0.210909579961 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721721810562 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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