The chart below shows the amount of sales for four different kinds of foods in supermarkets in four different cities in America.
The chart represents the four types of foods (bars, crackers, snacks and cookies) sold in supermarkets located in four different cities in the US, namely; New York, Boston, Los Angeles and San Diego. Overall, Boston had the highest sales in all food types and San Diego had the lowest sales in all types of foods. It is interesting to note that, New York and Los Angeles showed the similar sales.
Looking in details for Boston had the highest sales for all types of foods; in particular, cookies of $3500 million of sales, Bars of $2500 million sales, $1000 million of crackers and about $700 million of snacks. In comparison, San Diego was having the lowest sales in all foods of $1500 million for cookies, $1000 million for bars, $500 million for crackers and approximately $100 million for snacks.
Meanwhile, Los Angeles and New York were experienced of similar trend where cookies and snacks had the same amount of sales of $2500 million and about $400 million respectively. In terms of crackers and bars, the supermarket located in Los Angeles recorded for higher sales than that of New York supermarkets.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'in particular']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.333333333333 0.268076937826 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.0845070422535 0.116061578633 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0469483568075 0.0759168565197 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.018779342723 0.0366838410393 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00469483568075 0.0131127313244 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.169014084507 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0328638497653 0.0379272487307 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51586049769 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00469483568075 0.0210936926555 22% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0704225352113 0.0948980150116 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00469483568075 0.00967000014798 49% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1094.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.9 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78835978836 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343915343915 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253968253968 0.247514529752 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.100529100529 0.171178102325 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0687830687831 0.112407865282 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51586049769 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.546246751206 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 34.9831369234 49.3433353143 71% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8419020519 42.9750493124 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.285714286 135.714022679 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.689975730869 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 52.3968253968 47.7609492067 110% => OK
Elegance: 4.95652173913 2.94281807926 168% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45024041341 0.418131533498 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.287904443032 0.181151798455 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.201131359843 0.0850326197045 237% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.7673074137 0.706616315825 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137430536683 0.157042692854 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268808602238 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127277279099 0.108899403657 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.436654029305 0.367819155151 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.095697923304 0.0812612215331 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341899867601 0.316326947829 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711719698594 0.0921553760075 77% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.