With an increasing population communication via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree?
In modern era, people prefer to contact with each other either online are through messaging, and due to increase in use of these type of technology old ways of communication like face to face is losing its importance. I believe that these types of connection help people to link with each other.
To begin, social networking and conversation through internet among people is becoming famous day by day. In nowadays its very easy for everyone to chat with people through internet and technology is developing very rapidly providing many ways of communication. For example, Facebook is becoming very famous in young and adult generation, and almost 2/3rd of the world population is using Facebook as way of contact. As a result of this type of communication, people able to find their old friends, and they can share a lot of things with each other.
Secondly, 95% of the world population is using mobile phones, and there are a lot of softwares which are very easy and feasible for use. For instance Whats app, Viber and text messaging are using in large number for contacts, and by this way people convey their messages to others in a very easy way and in low price of money.
Due to these modern types of communication, old ways of connection between people, such as face to face meeting with each other, had lost its importance. But still there are a lot of people in the world, which prefer these old types of contact with each other, but as there is shortage of time with people, so people meet face to face very less.
All in all, I agree that modern technology had brought a lot of modern ways of communication, and many individuals prefer them to use these in their daily life, but still in some part of the world people use their old methods of contact with each other.
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contact with each other either online are through messaging, and due to increase in use of these type
contact with each other either online which is through messaging, and due to the increase in use of this type
its very easy for everyone
it's very easy for everyone
as way of contact
as the way of contact
people able to find their old friends,
people are able to find their old friends,
there are a lot of people in the world, which prefer these old types of contact with each other
there are a lot of people in the world, who prefer these old types of contact with each other
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Different Words: 136 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 317 350
No. of Characters: 1425 1500
No. of Different Words: 136 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.22 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.495 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.449 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.495 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.447 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.701 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.139 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: Nowadays
...g people is becoming famous day by day. In nowadays its very easy for everyone to chat with...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...easy and feasible for use. For instance Whats app, Viber and text messaging are using...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26724137931 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.117816091954 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10632183908 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0316091954023 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.172413793103 0.122226691241 141% => OK
Participles: 0.0287356321839 0.0403226058552 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54634183756 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0747126436782 0.0861772015684 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00287356321839 0.021408717616 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00574712643678 0.011925033212 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1787.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 316.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65506329114 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294303797468 0.374742101984 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177215189873 0.28420135186 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129746835443 0.203846283523 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0791139240506 0.137316102897 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54634183756 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.037074148 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439873417722 0.56093040696 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1522165071 60.7387585426 71% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.7272727273 20.7743622355 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0555807683 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.454545455 127.492653851 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.7743622355 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.4487917146 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.546875 1.69124875643 151% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301151269334 0.332605444948 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.175213568734 0.102741220458 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103540414615 0.0668466124924 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.721480078526 0.534860350844 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160527949965 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15801172777 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562229636573 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364727936968 0.324371583561 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100386347415 0.0638462369009 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209340883342 0.228012699653 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456511215137 0.058150111329 79% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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