By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The method of punish criminals has changed since the introduction of contemporary era. Some people claim that the most effective punishment is the life sentence because capital punishment violates of criminal laws. Both the outlooks will be critiqued before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
Some people opine that life sentences are the best approaches for the criminal punishments. Life without the possibility of parole is an alternative to capital punishment that addresses our need for public safety. Almost 9 out of 10 responses that life in prison without parole feels secure than that of capital punishment.
Moreover, costs involving life imprisonment are cheaper than capital punishment. The costs of carrying out a death sentence is more than the life imprisonment, because criminals are carrying out endless appeals to delay the procedures and takes up a lot of times. In California, for instance, spent more than $117 million each year to maintain and procedure of a death penalty compared to $2.34 million for life in sentences.
On the other hand, death penalty can be the definite measure to reduce crime rates. Life sentences are not a good way to ensure that the criminal does not commit such crimes again. In the USA, the prison murdering cases had accounted for more than $76% of all crimes. In some cases, when the criminals got out from the prison with sentencing life imprisonment intentionally or unintentionally, the public will not be secured.
After addressing both the aspects I come to conclusion that pros of death penalty are outweighed by its cons. We should not be swayed by the action of capital punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'for instance', 'in some cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285223367698 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.151202749141 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721649484536 0.0946595960268 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0309278350515 0.0501214627716 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0137457044674 0.0437548338989 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147766323024 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0481099656357 0.0403226058552 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8883083116 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240549828179 0.0326793684256 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0137457044674 0.00163938923432 838% => OK
Determiners: 0.116838487973 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137457044674 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103092783505 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1642.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14981273408 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38202247191 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288389513109 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205992509363 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153558052434 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8883083116 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.0528582661 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2509648983 49.517814964 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.6389513109 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.45614035088 1.69124875643 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278485728748 0.332605444948 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124198424483 0.102741220458 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0756182933221 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598849009168 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107818865478 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115066759281 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429273062075 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327626994564 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0366676270472 0.0638462369009 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17945241201 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186005782884 0.058150111329 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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